you’re willing to bet
You believed in me when I didn’t
You nudged me along when I was stuck
I don’t think that’s just luck
You’re the spirit in that duck
And the life force to nature’s creation
You’re the largest eternal nation
And a piece of you has rested in me
It wasn’t until with open eyes I began to see
You challenged me for a reason
And loved me through every season
Just as I planted a seed in your soil
Our connection will never spoil
Like an everlasting love coil
Together we shine
And remind each other we are the divine
I see you in every sign
And feel you in our forever bloodline
Caught in this universal net
From the day we met
To the day this life is set
You’re willing to bet
Ace
you’re probably right
Life is short, you’re probably right
Life is more than this lifetime, you’re probably right
Your destiny is in your hands, you’re probably right
Your dreams only remain dreams, you’re probably right
You are a fragment, you’re probably right
You are the infinite Universe, you’re probably right
Love is all there is, you’re probably right
This reality is just an illusion, you’re probably right
I am your mind’s eye, you’re probably right
I am who I choose to be, you’re probably right
Because whatever you believe, you’re probably right
Ace
you’re in my head every night, every night
Memories and flashes
Fire and ashes
Reality crashes
This horizon clashes
The light and the dark
Battle for who makes their mark
The night wins this race
And it’s the dream I can’t wait to face
I lay my head to rest
Thoughts swirl about today’s part in my quest
I feel blessed
Upon this universal test
There are days I ace
There are days I rely on my foundational base
But every day, I have this pillow and bed
Awaiting my head
And a story I haven’t read
I enter the dream dimension
My reality’s extension
I feel my higher self seeking my attention
Letting me ride this ascension
This cycle repeats
Each time I embrace these warm sheets
The Universe and I have many little visits or meets
Beyond sight
Through light
Quite bright
You’re in my head every night, every night
Ace
These three poems are brought together for a specific reason; without each other they wouldn’t exist. One of these poems has made its second appearance as it brings them all together. What’s your favorite poem of this series? I’d so love to hear!! Be fearless and free -Ace
34 responses to “The Bitter Series”
This picture along with the words expressed within this post Ace truly sing and exude colorful bursts of light. The way we view the world in our minds eye, an extremely personal yet Universal journey of wonder. This one is a conversation with our highest self, our soul’s essence. Deeply profound ❤❤❤
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Awwww thank you so much!!! I’m so glad to hear that and your kind, loving, deep and thoughtful words mean so much to me!! I appreciate you, friend!!!! Yes, I like how you say that…”journey of wonder” 👌🏻. I’m touched by your support, always!!!Hugs and love sis 🖤🖤🖤
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Wow! I have no words (no words at all) tell me Ace how old are u? Cause u certainly write amazing 🤩 and it is deeply profound and delicate with a sweet touch of beautiful words. ❤️❤️
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Aww thank you so much!!!! You make my day, I’m so touched by this kind message!!! YOU are amazing!!!! I appreciate you so much, friend…blessed to have connected with you!!! Hugs and love 💛🤗
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All the three is good. But I pick up the first as my favourite. The rhyming and the poem just flows. 😍😍😍 Beautiful creation. Keep up the great work dear Ace. 🤝
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Awww thank you so much!!! I so appreciate that, especially from one of my favorite writers!! Grateful for you friend and your support means a lot to me!!! Hugs and love 🖤🖤🤗
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This is such a beautiful combination, a chemical mixing pot of synergies. I adore the middle poem, questions are enlightening. Such beautiful work. Love you! 🌹🙏
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Awww thank you so much Amber!!! I’m so glad to hear that and your support means the world to me!! Grateful for your friend, love you 💛🖤
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Wow Ace 🥰🙏
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Awww thank you so much!! That means a lot! Hugs and love dear friend 🖤🤗
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I wouldn’t dare to pick a favorite for all of them are such profound beautiful. Yet if I were to put a finger feeling on one, I pick the first one, it just captivated me with its rhythm. I loved the second because it felt familiar and it flowed so well from the first and then into the third. Amazing job Ace!!!
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Awe thank you so much!!! You’re so kind and I’m deeply touched by your loving support and words – means the world to me!!! Appreciate you, hugs and love 🖤🤗
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Love and Hugs :)))
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This is wonderful, and I totally feel like I get this… keeping the vision, keeping the faith… definitely what you do best! It’s absolutely positive and great. Hard to choose… but I guess I’ll choose the first one. Also love the third one though. :)) Rock on with the wonderfulness!
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Awww thank you Lia!!!! Ah that’s so kind…your support means so much to me and always brings a smile to my face/heart! Big hugs to you dear friend, here’s to rocking on with wonderfulness together!!! 😉🤗🖤
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Definitely hard to choose and I loved them all! You’re so wonderful and your writings are just amazing, Ace!!✨💛
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Omg, you make my day!!! Thank you so much, your words truly touch me and bring a smile to my face! Appreciate you and your support, hugs and love dear friend 🖤🖤🖤🤗
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I love the second one so much💞💞 also, wow this is such an amazing series. I love how they all sort of compatible in an awesome way, haha💜💜 didn’t know they were related 🌠 lots of love to u Ace🙏🙏
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Aww Aarushi, thank you so much!! I always get excited to see your name pop up in my notifications or reader!! Ah yes, they all do flow together…your support means so much to me dear friend!! Appreciate you, hugs and love 🖤🖤
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Again, lovely poems, 1 of which, yes, you posted earlier. I loved the first one alot❤️❤️❤️. Keep the motivation coming my friend!! Have a lovely day ❤️❤️💕🙏🌷🤗
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Thank you so much Diana!!! Means a lot coming from such an amazingly talented poet like yourself! I’m always touched by your love, support and encouragement!! Much love friend 🖤🖤
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Wooowww! All three of them are so beautifully written and you’ve done a spectacular job writing them! It’s hard to choose, but I think I’d go with the first one. You’re an amazing writer!! 👏👏
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Awww thank you so much!! I’m so touched! Your love and support means the world to me, truly, I can’t thank you enough!!! Grateful for you friend, much love 🖤🖤
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I love all of these pieces but wow the last one just has to be my favourite. It’s imagery is so good and it’s just such a beautifully written piece!! And as always, the last line is so hard hitting and so well done. Much love my friend, your poetry is so inspiring ❤ ❤
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Awww thank you so much Cait!!!! This messages truly makes my day! It’s even more special coming from one of my favorite poets!!! I am so grateful for you and your support!!! And you’re the first to say the last one is your favorite…it’s my favorite too!!!! I’m smiling ear to ear, much love 🖤🖤
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I can’t choose a favourite, they’re amazing individually but when you combine them, it’s just a gorgeous play on words and thoughts. I loved this so much! 🤗✨
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Aww thank you so much!!! I’m so glad to hear it!!! You’re so kind and I’m always touched by your loving support!!!!! Much love dear friend 🖤🖤🤗✨
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all three are well crafted, you display your wordsmith ability that is a tasty treat and inspiring. 💖🙂
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Aww, you make my day!! Thank you so much!! It really means a lot coming from one of my favorite poets!!! Always touched and grateful for your support and kindness. Much love 🖤🖤🤗
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