Know who you are, just stay
Youβre headed straight for fire
Just a lot a bit more than the eyes
Know who you are, just stay
Think thereβs sturdy walls
Thereβs an open door
If you see when she gives you the key
Reputations about her swirl
Ideas form and whispers travel
She looks you in the eye
And thatβs surprising
Sheβs confident and direct
Yet quiet and paradoxical
Often under the radar
But when sheβs on yours
Youβre headed straight for fire
A painted picture of what she should be
Hot or cold, shy or bold, strong or fold
On the surface or deep down, she knows
Stopped looking at the world
Started looking within
She sees him and her
But she sees her (self)
She chose her journey
Forged a discovery, she became
Just a lot a bit more than the eyes
She keeps her circle tight
Her eyes open and bright
Dimensions sheβs still finding
Truths sheβs still binding
But she knows a look goes beyond the eyes
She loves whatβs underneath
The unanswered questions
The boundaries and the fire together
The fearlessness and drive forever
So, she whistles to herself
Know who you are, just stay
Youβre headed straight for fire
Just a lot a bit more than the eyes
And whoever’s meant to be
will truly hear
that whistle
-Grace
I originally wrote a long behind the scenes on this one, but I think it’s all here if one truly hears π. This is a “story” of knowing who you are. And yes, fire seems to be the theme as of lateβ¦it’ll stay that way :).

38 responses to “whistle of fire”
I am in awe of this powerful, lyrical piece! I absolutely love the way it concludes,
“So, she whistles to herself
Know who you are, just stay
Youβre headed straight for fire
Just a lot a bit more than the eyes
And whoeverβs meant to be
will truly hear
that whistle”
Wow!
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Awww Aaysid, thank you so very much! How sweet of you to quote it, means a lot to me! And thank you for thoughtfully reading, this one was definitely meant to be more lyrical π. Appreciate you!!! π€
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You are very welcome, Grace.β€οΈ
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What a soulful piece that carries me straight into the narrative in that I feel and hear the sounds and senses present. The empowerment and sense of belonging is poetically gripping. β€
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Awww Layla, you are so kind! Iβm so happy to hear that, thank you for your most thoughtful support. Truly appreciate you and your poetic brilliance π€π€
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Simply charming. Successful existential verses to reach new horizons on the path of life because you know that a look goes beyond the eyes.
With your intrepid lyrics you give us a little push to move forward.
Hugs in the distance, dear Grace.
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Thank you so much, Lincol!! Aww I deeply appreciate that, you are so sweet! Your touching comments always mean so very much to me, my friend. Hugs and love your way π€π€π€π€
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Beautiful, powerful and intriguing…written by a poet who knows herself well and also the dance of Life:) So many lines, I just loved but maybe this one, I found most intriguing and exciting:)
Sheβs confident and direct
Yet quiet and paradoxical
Often under the radar
But when sheβs on yours
Youβre headed straight for fire.
Wow! Love that whole thought.
I just feel your strength, your confidence and your openness to…..it ALL!! So inspiring!!
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Awww Karima, thank you so very much!! I swear when I first designed my blog I almost called it βdance of lifeβ, so Iβm smiling big reading your connective/synchronistic words π. I love that verse too, thank you for sharing! I am so blessed to be fully heard by you π, thank you for your always encouraging support π€π€π€π€
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It’s always a joy to read your thoughts dear Grace πΉ
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A great journey to be headed straight for that fire! It speaks to me of the fire that transforms, that purges all impurities and refines. You’re a poet and an alchemist! ππ
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Aww thank you so much, Tricia! I love how you speak on that βtransformationββ¦Iβve definitely been feeling that as of late and itβs seeping into my writing. Appreciate you and your kindness, thanks for always thoughtfully supporting π€π€
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Wow. Amazing, such a beautiful and powerful piece, my friend. Brilliant. πππππ
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Aww thanks so much, dear Grace!! Your comments means a lot to me, thank you for always being there π€π€
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You are so welcome, Grace. Truly my pleasure.π
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Wonderful imagery Grace!! β€οΈ
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Thanks so much, Cindy!!! Truly appreciate your kind words π€
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It’s always my pleasure Grace! π
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Woahh…Grace, This Masterpiece has been such Beautifully penned. I can feel the eternal fire π―π₯βΊοΈπ€©π It’s super powerful,βΊοΈ
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Aww Karan, thank you so very much!!!! Aww Iβm so happy to hear that, brings a big smile to my face!!! Appreciate you, dear dear friend π€π€π€π€
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Beautiful, dear Grace! βBut she knows a look goes beyond the eyesβ Exactly so; true sight has nothing to do with biological eyes. Lovely write! π€π€
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Thank you so much, dear Jeff!!! Your comments always mean the world to me, I am so grateful!! Makes me so happy you loved this one π€π€
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Awww, youβre most welcome, dear Grace! Always! π€π€
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Wow Graceβ¦ such an amazing title and a strong energy throughout the piece. ππ₯
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Aww thanks so much, dearest Lia!!! Your touching words and support truly mean a lot to me!! Love and hugs your way, always π€π€π€π€
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Dimensions to still find. I like this idea. Good work!
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Thank you, Ben!!! Glad you liked this one, always appreciate your comments ππ
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Welcome!!! ππ
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Such tenacious strength in this poem, and the fire imagery fits perfectly And the flow! Excellent poetry as always, Grace. π
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Thank you so much, Mike. I love how you use the word βtenaciousββ¦I think thatβs spirit of this one π. Grateful for your kind visit and words, friend π€π€
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I know who you are, just stay… you’re a brilliant writer, who can imagine and inspire in her own ways. Yes, Grace, that’s literally true about you. So, she whistles to herself…just out of box. Love this soulful and wonderful poem. It’s one of your bests. ππ
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I am just so deeply grateful for this comment, words canβt express! This piece meant a lot to me as itβs vulnerable in a different way, so I am truly appreciative of you for thoughtfully reading. Thank you for always inspiring and supporting me π€π€
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Always a pleasure, Grace, you’re welcome π
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Awesome, bold and beautiful.. ππΌπππΌππΌ…
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Aww thanks so much!!!! Appreciate your kindness π€π€
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