The future is a mystery
I hope it’s not history
Somedays I look forward to you
Other days I want to tell you, shoo
But you always stay there
I don’t know if you care
Or if you’re always fair
My feelings I wear
You and me are bound
I’ll always be seeing you around
You won’t make me drown
Definitely not asking for a crown
Just don’t let me down
Ace
Micro-poems are new to me, but I wanted to give it a shot! When words come, they come in heaps, so containing it into a few short lines is tricky. But, I love this piece. It describes my relationship with the future so well. I hope this helps you on your journey! Be fearless and free -Ace
Fearless Free Soul 
27 responses to “don’t let me down”
We never know God’s mysterious ways as we trust by surrendering to Divine timing and unconditional love always❤ Beautiful post Ace!
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Thank you so much!! That is beautifully said. Your kind support and thoughtful words always mean the world to me!! Much love and spirit hugs to you my friend 🤗🤍
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Yay, my pleasure always❤❤❤
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Beautiful poem ❤️
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Thank you so much!! That means a lot to me, much love and spirit hugs 🤍🤗
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This is beautiful ✨
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Thank you so much Wardah!! Your support and kind words are much appreciated! Love and light 💫💗
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Ace this is a beautiful poem, I especially like the first couple of lines, they really spoke to me ❤️❤️
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Thank you so much Cait!! Your support and thoughtful/kind comments always mean so much to me! Lots of love to you my friend 🤍🤗
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beautiful poem Ace!! 💗💗
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Thank you so much!! I so appreciate your support and kind words!! Spirit hugs 🤗
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I love the rhyme scheme of this, it made me smile especially the “shoo”😄💥
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Thank you so much!! I smile at the shop part too! I always feel like poetry expands my vocabulary because I’m always looking for words to rhyme with!! Your support touches me deeply, big hugs to you 🤗🤗
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Sweet and a well written micro poem😊 poetry can express so much, right ? ❤️🙏🤗🤗💐
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Oh yes, it really can! Thank you so much Diana, that means a lot, especially coming from such a talented poet like yourself! Your support is always appreciated, much love 💛🤗
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Beautiful. ❤
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Thank you so much Amber! I really appreciate your support, spirit hugs 🤗🤗
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😘
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Definitely not asking for a crown
Just don’t let me down
Perfectly beautifully and powerfully said!
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Awe thank you so much!!! I appreciate the kind words and support!! Lots of love 🤍
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That’s such a creative way to portray the future! I think this micro-poem turned out incredibly well!
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Thank you so much D!!! I really appreciate your kind words and support; I am glad to hear you liked it! I’m always excited to see your name pop up in my notifications 😊, you’re an awesome friend! I do hope you’ll check out my new video album, FREEDOM, I’d so love to hear your thoughts – I know you were excited for Hello Future and it’s out now!!! Much love my friend ❤️❤️
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Always a pleasure reading your posts, Ace!
Of course, I will! I’ve been off WordPress for a while because if school work but I’ll be sure to check it out soon! Much love to you too!🤗❤️
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Awe, thank you! Appreciate you friend 🤗💛
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Good one Ace 😇
History is not a mystery
Life is nothing
But a mystery
How can then
Future be a history 😅
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Thank you so much!! I truly appreciate your kind words and support. Wow, that is amazingly written, thank you for that gem! Much love 🤍🤍
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Always a pleasure Ace 😊💖
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