The whoosh
of turning a crisp page
The whirl
of setting an invisible stage
The rustle
of wind running through a tree
The tumble
of waves washing on the sea
The silence
of roots tunneling into the earth
The whisper
of a season’s new birth
The meaning of sound
hits us round and round
It’s something we let pass us by
yet we know inside it will always fly
In every moment you look
there’s a song to hear
In every lesson we took
was a harmony so clear
My name is grace
but my sound has a different pace
A verse without labels or forms
and a chorus with peaceful storms
-Grace
38 responses to “storms”
Amazing piece, Grace. Absolutely LOVE it. So beautiful and distinct. The sound effects in the beginning are awesome.💕🙌💕
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Thank you, Grace!!! This comment means so very much to me especially coming from you 🤗🤍. Appreciate you and your support, dear friend.
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Always a pleasure, my friend. Truly enjoyed.💕
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A beautiful write with an electrical atmosphere, Grace 🙂 Love the accompanying image too!
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Aww thank you so much, dear Sunra!! I love how you say “electrical atmosphere”, means a lot to me 😊. Always grateful for your support 🤍🤗
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You’re most welcome!
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This made me more mindful of all the sounds around me and all the varying frequencies and vibrations. Love the ending 💓
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Aww thank you so much, Tricia! I’m so happy to hear that as it was my intention with this piece. Your comments always have a special place in my heart, much appreciated 🤍🤗
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Always my pleasure! 💝🙏🥰
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I was able to see and hear your words. Just beautiful!
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Aww Auntie Marlene!!!! Brought big smiles to see your name pop up in my notifications!! Thank you for always supporting and encouraging me, love you 🤍🤗🤍🤗
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Love you more! ❤️
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Awesome, Beautiful, Terrific, Amazing are just some of the words coming from top of my head🙈This beautiful piece is a site to behold. I love those last four lines Grace. I mean , Absolutely Fabulous 😘😍A true masterpiece😊💯💯💯
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Such a beautiful piece Grace!!💕
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Aww Cindy, thank you so much for your kind words!!! Much appreciated 🤍🤗
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It’s my pleasure!! 💗
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Sounds are so important in our lives and your beautiful descriptions brought them alive in my ears. We don’t realize how much of what we call reality is sound…until for some reason, we can not hear it. Every single example you used was like a trigger for me to hear it, from waves to “the whisper of the season’s new birth” what a treat for the senses you have shared today with all of us, Grace… I just love this piece.❤️🌹❤️
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Aww Karima, thank you for this thoughtful comment. I am so lucky to be deeply read by you 🤗. I love how you say “we don’t realize how much of what we call reality is sound” – YES!!! I wholeheartedly agree with you. Aww I’m so happy to hear you loved this, means the world to me. That line is one my favorites too 😊. Thank you as always for being so supportive, I appreciate you dear friend 🤍🤗
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This is a stunning piece, both in form and meaning. All the verses have a special rhythm, a sound that resonates with readers. The message conveyed is great. In every moment you look there’s a song to hear…so well said! Let’s listen to the sound of waves within and around us. The last stanza is simply superb. A masterpiece indeed, Grace 👌😊💖
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Awwww KK!!! “A masterpiece” from you means more than I can put into words, thank you so much!! I’m so very grateful for this touching comment, you are so truly kind. Here’s to listening to those waves together (I love how perfectly you said that 😊). Thank you for always being there and bringing a big smile to my heart 🤗🤍🤗🤍
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I love this piece…everything about it is heavenly…the sound of it…the flow of these lines…the wisdom of Grace 💫 (❁´◡`❁)✨
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Aww thank you so much, dear Navin. You are so kind, thank you as always for such touching words 🤍🤗🤍🤗
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You’re welcome, dear Grace ✨💟💫🤗
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In this busy world many people fail to pay attention to the sounds around them. They are completely lost in there own thoughts. But if you pause and pay attention to these sounds it’s an ethereal feeling ✨️ Excellent piece Grace 🙌 the different sounds of nature have been presented in a rhythmic way which makes it even more beautiful 😇
Well done sister😇
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Aww Hitesh, what wise words!!! I completely agree with you, that’s the message I was hoping to get across! So happy you enjoyed this, means the world to me!!! Your comments always have a special place in my heart, brother!!! Grateful for you 🤗🤍
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😇 happy new year sister 😊 have a great year ahead🎊😇
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Same to you 🤍🤍🤗🤗
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Tranquil, hopeful, inspiring, and so very beautiful, dear Grace! I love this one very much. 🤍🤗🤍🤗
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Aww thank you so much, dearest Jeff!! Makes me so truly happy to hear you loved this one. Your special comments always leave me so touched, much appreciated 🤍🤗
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This is so beautiful! Absolutely love the imagery and the rhyme scheme. Missed your writing, it’s amazing ✨
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Aww thank you so much for reading and leaving such a special comment, dear friend!! I appreciate you 🤗🤍🤗🤍, so happy we connected again.
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Of course! I’m so happy as well 🙂
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This was such a gorgeous piece to read, Grace! Your beautiful writing amazed me. Loved it so much!! ♥️ Have a great day!😊
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Thank you so much, dear friend! Aww you are so sweet, happy to hear you loved it! Appreciate your kind support 🤍🤗
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This wonderful, the imagery and flow is top of the line!
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Ah Tony!! So happy to see your name again, missed you! Thank you for visiting and for your always thoughtful/kind words 🤍🤗
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❤💕💕💕💕…
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🤍🤗🤍🤗
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