an eternal promise

You whisper sweet somethings to me when I’m weak,
You do the talking for me when I can’t speak.

The thought of you keeps me company,
I find comfort even in your critique.
Your soul upon mine,
Melds into something unique.

What if love is more than emotions in its entirety?
Maybe love is more than you and me entirely?
The music of your aura is the answer,
The force behind my smile, the dreamy dancer.

You’re still with me no matter my imperfection,
It’s the beauty in the way you stay for my protection.
Maybe we’ll meet in some other dimension,
For now, you’re just my reflection.
Standing in the mirror, revealing who I should be
And loving this version that I see.

I am whole, you were my missing peace,
I see you in me, I hear you within.
Anchor your heart here and leave it down,
You’ll always be there if I ever drown.

Ace + Aarushi


58 responses to “an eternal promise”

  1. this was such a fun Collab, Ace❤️❤️ one of many, I’m sure✨✨ I love your ideas, words and your style! thank you for letting me be free and fearless with you❤️❤️

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    • Awwww thank you so much, Preeths!!! You are a sweetheart, a beautiful soul and a true friend! I am so grateful for all the love and support you shower me with – means more than I can say. Keep being amazing, my dear friend!!!! 🖤💫🤗

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    • Thank you so much!!!! Ah haha 😂, that’s so funny…more about the voice in our heads. Always appreciate you support and thoughtful comments, means a lot! Much love, my friend 🖤🤗

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    • Awww thank you so much, Ben!! You are the best, so grateful for you and your support!! Those are some of my favorite lines too!! Yay, I’m so glad to hear that!!! Your support and kindness leaves me so touched, Always! Thank you for being YOU 🖤🤗

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      • You’re welcome. That’s awesome you loved those lines as well. I think we have some of the same poetical tastes. Thanks so much! You stay being positive and fearless and free you as well! 🙂

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  2. So much beauty in each line and word, in depth of meaning and how it is conveyed. The coherence in the collaboration is amazing!! This is great work done, just lovely to be in such brilliant company 💛✨✨✨

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    • Awwww sis, thank you so much!!! I am smiling so big right now!!! You mean a lot to me, dear Maria! Always touched by your support, hugs and love 🖤🤗✨

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  3. Just read this on Aarushi’s blog! This poem is so beautiful. It’s a wonderful collab!! I love whole poem, but the third and last stanzas really stand out to me. Something about this poem is just so ethereal and I love it so much. Beautiful piece ❤

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    • Aww thank you so much, Wardah!! Can I still call you Wardah?!? 🥴🤪 I am so happy to hear that!!! It’s so good to have you back and your loving support means the world to me!!!! Grateful for you, dear friend!! Hugs and love 🖤🤗🤍

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      • You can still call me Wardah, thanks for double checking 🙂 and you’re so welcome, Ace!! So glad to connect with you again! 🤗❤

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  4. Awesome, Ace and Aarushi. So beautiful and profound. The synergic effect of collab is easily palpable. All the best for your future endeavours!💐💐

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    • Thank you so much!!! Awwwww that’s so amazing to hear!!! Grateful for you and your support, means more than you could know!!! Hugs and love, my dear friend 🖤🤗

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  5. A beautiful collab, Ace! You are so good at these! I’m definitely looking forward to starting our collab soon.🥰🥰. This was a masterpiece! Keep writing my dear. Stay blessed and happy always❤️❤️🥰💫🤗🌌🎁

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    • Awww thank you so much, dear Diana!!! Yay, me too!!!! You are so kind and your support means more than I could ever say…I feel so lucky to know you!!! I love and appreciate you, amazing friend! Hugs and love 🖤🤗✨

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  6. “I am whole, you were my missing peace,
    I see you in me, I hear you within.
    Anchor your heart here and leave it down,
    You’ll always be there if I ever drown.”
    Bring a drumroll people, this is the very definition of soulfulness. Ace, you blow my mind every SINGLE. TIME.

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    • Awww Rishika, you’re just amazing! You always leave the most touching, thoughtful and supportive comments!!! Thank you so much, my dear friend!! You make my day, you have the brightest energy/light! I appreciate you, much love 🖤🤗✨

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  7. Ace & Aarushi, what an amazing collab…harmony…symphony…rhyming flawlessly…flowing…beautiful reflection…mindful…spiritual…is what I see when I read this poetry ✨💫

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    • Awwwww thank you so much, Navin!!! What a touching comment, you always leave the most thoughtful, supportive and inspiring words – means more than you could know!!! Love…soul touching…inspired…big smile…deeply connected…electric…joy…happiness…eternal gratitude…is what I feel when I read your comment ☺️😁😉🤗🖤

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  8. Wowww!! Wonderful collab dear both! 🤝😊
    And beautifully written ace.. I’m really so sooo happy to meet you.. I’m very lucky to have a beautiful friend like you..🤗🤗

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    • Aww thank you so much!!! That means a lot and you leave such encouraging words!!!! I’m so so happy to meet you too!!! I feel very blessed and lucky to connect with such a bright light like you! Even though we only met today, I feel like I’ve known you for a while!!! You are a glowing and shining star and an incredible friend. Much love and stay amazing 🖤🖤

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      • Awwwwww!!! A billion thanks for you dear… You really made my day.. I’m too feel blessed and lucky to connect with you such a golden star like you!! Yeah, I too feeling like that my dear friend!! You are shining and brighting star and my amazing friend.. I ever seen a comment like this.. such a fabulous comment.. Much love..🤗🤗

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