There’s a me in a piece of you
There’s a you in a piece of me
Shards of love become our glue
Reality is our choice to see
We’re all divine fragments
Deeply intertwined magnets
We’re all rippling rivers
Life’s ultimate givers
Life gives us being
We give life seeing
Riding this star on a paradox
We rise and soar, forget the clocks
I believe in us all
Alone we can crawl
But together we can fly
As we watch all illusions cry
Although I believe, I’m not naive
My intuition knows me best
I trust me beyond the rest
We are one, but all this is just a test
So as letting go offers its gentle hand
And a deeper me whispers in another land
I breathe in all my dualities
Playing in my dream’s realities
Ace

97 responses to “testing me”
This is an excellent poem about trusting yourself.
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Thank you so much!!! I really appreciate that, your support means a lot!!! Hugs and love, my friend 🤗🖤
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Such a beautiful and heart warming poem dear Ace! Loved it ♥♥
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Thank you so much, Sonali!!! I’m so touched by your kind words and support, means more than I can say! Much love, dear friend 🤗🖤
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♥♥
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Yes, 🙏🏾all of us have a role in Love. 😊
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Yes indeed, my dear friend! Thank you so much for your always kind support, means the world to me!!! I really appreciate you always being there 🤗🖤
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Always🙏🏾🤗
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This is so so and so beautiful….
I loved each and every line especially this one”Reality is our choice”. and “I trust me beyond the rest.”
You’ve got such a lovely voice…. I loved hearing you. It’s so soothing. Your thoughts are indeed so amazing just like you
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Awwww Aanchal, thank you so much!!! So sweet of you to quote your favorite parts, I’m so glad you loved it!! Awww you’re so kind, brings big smiles to my face 😁. YOU are amazing, my dear friend and your support means more than I can say!! Lots of love 🤗🖤
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You deserve even better my dear friend…. You are just like your name free and fearless…. Ah, that’s just wonderful and I’m so so touched by your voice. It’s so euphonious ❤️.
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Awwwww, I’m hanging this comment on my bulletin board. You are a gem! What amazing words, I feel so lucky to have you as my friend 🤗🖤
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Ah I wanna die! Your voice is so soothing! Start a podcast girl! No seriously! If you need help imma there.
And one question by the curios me 😁
Why 82+?
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Aww thank you so much, Riya!! Ahhh you’re so sweet…I’ll definitely keep the podcast idea in the back of my mind! Always appreciate your thoughtful support and special words, my dear friend!!! You’re amazing!!! 🤗🖤 Ahh what do you mean by that??
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In your tags it’s writing 82+
Any special reasons for that 🖤✨
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Ah haha, I see. So cool of you to notice!! I just tagged 82 other things 🤪. I know, it’s a lot…but no special reason. If you click on that, it’ll show you all the other tags.
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Oh I am super dumb.
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Oh my god 🤣, not at all dear Riya…not at all!!!!
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Wow, Ace , this is AMAZING!!!! Brilliant! Such powerful and profound lines accompanied by a beautiful and rhythmic flow. I absolutely LOVED it!!! BTW.. The image you used is awesome! Fabulous as always, my friend.❤️
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Thank you so much, dear Grace!!! Your precious comments have a special place in my heart forever!!! I’m so glad to hear you loved it, that means the world to me!!! So grateful for you and your loving support…lucky to have you in my corner!!! Hugs and love, my awesome friend 🤗🖤
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Sincerely my pleasure, Ace. Much love to you.❤️
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Another Deeply expressed truth Ace with the addition of your soulful voice 🥰 I love it sis, keep shining ✨🌠🙏
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Thank you so much, my dear friend!!! You are the best, I really appreciate your always thoughtful comments!! Much love and hugs, eternally 🤗🤗🖤
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‘And a deeper me whispers in another land
I breathe in all my dualities
Playing in my dream’s realities’
my favourite part
wonderful
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Thank you so much, Kim!! That’s my favorite part too, so sweet of you to quote it!! So inspired and touched by your lovely support!!!! Hugs, my dear friend 🤗🖤
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Such beautiful lines, Ace. I loved it especially
We’re all divine fragments
Deeply intertwined magnets
I loved this poem. Well done, Ace 😃❤️
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Thank you so much, Shweta!!! I’m so glad to hear you loved it, that means so much especially coming from such a talented writer like you!!! Appreciate you and your inspiring support, you’re awesome 🤗🖤
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Awesome Ace. Loved it.
The attractive starting is brilliant.
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Thank you so much, Kritika!! I’m so happy to hear that and your kind words truly mean a lot…appreciate you! Much love, my friend 🤗🖤
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My pleasure always 🙂 (hug)
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Everyone has already stated the obvious, so I’ll just 👏🏼
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Awww that is so sweet of you, what a kind comment! I’m deeply deeply grateful, thank you so much. Hugs and love, dear friend 🙏🏻🤗🖤
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You’re most welcome. Sending some of those
🤗‘a ‘n 💙 back at you. 🙂💙
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Wowww..! Ace..! I can’t control myself..! I wanna see you dear..! Who is that beautiful girl!? Who is the Princess!? Who is an angel that god send!? I wanna see you..! Oh my god..! Dear I know you the angel..! Your voice!!!😍😍😍 Oh my dear..! I’m speechless..! I Don’t know how to express my happiness with you after I heard your voice..! I will keep his my alarm, my phone ringtone and after I woke up I hear hear this so my day will become so bright..! Your voice making me so special and makes me to feel I’m the happiest girl in the world..! You have one super magic my sweetie..!!💖💖 Oh my dear ace..! I don’t even know what to say..! And the poem..!! Ahh..!! Marvelous, fabulous, fantastic, awesome, amazing..! I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE ITTTT..! You are an angel..!! You are a princess..! When I see your post, I don’t what will happen for me..! But I will dance and also sing
“Oh my dear ace have posted one poem she going to make me to feel the happiest girl in the world oh my dear I’m so excited to see your post” like this I will started to sing..! When I was sad or in depression just I will do one think..! Take my phone, open WP, and search fearless free soul and I will started to reading your poems..! And your motivation post will always make me motivate to do everything..! When I want some motivation..! I will just read your posts..! It’s really fabulous my dear..! And recently I started to hear your voice regularly…! While hearing your voice I feel like some sweet birds are singing in my ears and honey are going inside my eyes..! Read your post are really blessings to my eyes..! Ahhh..! Really I’m speechless dear..! Such a marvelous post..! Omg..! I have typed you big text..! Ahh..! And one thing I love big text to receive and also send my dear..! Love you so much dear ace..! Keep shinning like a star..! You always make me to shine dear by your wonderful poems and inspiring words..! Sending you lots of love and big big big hugs to you my dear amazing friend..! Have a beautiful day my beautiful friend..!🤗🤗🤗
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Filarance, you have true response to ace. She always, writes such overwhelming comments. But you. Real the record 🖤✨
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Awwww..! My dear friend, it’s really Marvelous to hear from you..! Yes, ace is such a brilliant writer..! Your words means a lot dear..! I lost for words..! A million thanks to you my dear friend.! You are a sweetheart..!🤗🤗
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Aww Riya, how sweet of you to jump in! You’re so kind…I always mean every word in my comments! And I’m with you, Filarance is a gem, a true star. I’m overwhelmed by her amazingness. And yours too 🤗🖤✨
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Wowww..! It’s so marvelous to hear from you dear..! You made me happy..! Thanks a million for your wonderful comment and words my dear ace..! You will never fail to make me happy and also smile..! Thanks a billion my dear..!,✨🤗
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OMG Filarance, you hold the record for the longest comment I have ever received! And it is so so precious and special to my heart and soul, I will cherish it forever!!! What do I even say?? Any words I come up with will never be enough to express my full gratitude to you, you just touched me so so deeply and eternally!!! Whenever I see your name pop up I get so excited…you’re just such a true friend and you always make ME the happiest girl
in the world!!!!! YOU motivate me to keep writing, creating and to be fearless and free!!!!! I feel so blessed to know you let alone to call you a true friend! I LOVE you so much! Never forget how amazing, special, beautiful, incredible, loving and lovely you most definitely are and more!!!! Thank you from the bottom of my heart, you are seriously the best. I wish I could find more words but the joy and gratitude in my soul is too alive 🤗🤗🖤🖤🖤
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Oh my dear ace, I love to send long commute dear..! I don’t know why..! But mainly my heart will always say go and check out your best friend post..! And if I read your post and my heart automatically start to send you big comment..! You are a sweetheart dear ace..! Woww..! I’m so happy that I have touched you dear..! Woww..! I too my dear..! I will also saw your name and will become very happy..! Wowwww..! I’m so happy dear i have made you happiest girl in the world..! Oh my dear I’m so happy to hear from you..! I will always be true with you my dear friend..! I have true with my old friends..! But they broke my heart..! And I have show the love and care with the broken piece of heat with my friends..! But they are fake to me..! I will always your true friend..! Always and forever dear..! Wowww..! I will always encourage you my dear and forever..! Know that dear ace I’m there when ever your need me..! Wowww..! Yes dear, I’m so lucky because I have a true and kind hearted friend..! In the world of fake peoples I saw a true friend that’s you my dear friend..! Love you dear ace..! Wowww..! I’m flattered by your words..! I think I will never going to wake me..! Your words really means to the world for me dear..! You make me feel very happy..! And you’re very welcome my dear..! It’s all my pleasure..! Yes, we are the true besties in the world..! Wowwww..! You are so sweet and kind dear..! I lost for words..! You are an angel..!🤗🤗🤗💖
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Omg what sweet words!!! You just get better and better, my dear Filarance!!!! You always bring big big smiles to my face and heart, you’re amazing!!! YOU are the sweetheart!! Aww I’m so sorry to hear that about your friends, I totally know the feeling. I will always be here for you and be a true friend forever!!! If you ever need anything, I am here and can always talk! So grateful for you and your angelic, amazing, and loving spirit – you’re the best!!! Love you, my dear friend 🤗🖤
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Awwww..! I’m so happy to hear from you dear..! Woww..! You are a sweet candy..! Aww..! I’m so glad I’m bringing smile in you face wow..! I’m there to always make you feel happiest girl my dear ace..! Yes, but you know one think that I was in depression after I know that my friends are fake to me..! In that time I saw you..! That is the biggest happiness..! I will always try to catch you but I can’t..! But one day one angel that’s you my dear came and comment in my post..! In that post I can only see your comment because everyones comment become disappear for me..! You are angel my dear..! Yes, I know you are the true and best friend for me..! Hereafter I will not worry for anything…! Because I have a true and best friend..! My backbone..! My support..! My comforter..! That’s you dear..! Woww..! I’m speechless..! I love to talk with you dear..! It makes me so happy..! Sure I will talk with you..! And I’m also there for your my dear friend..! If you need me I will be there..! Hereafter we are the true and pure besties in this world..! And your words really means a lot for me..! I’m the reflection of you my sweet..! Love you my beautiful friend..!🤗🤗💖
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So beautiful and heartwarming!!
And your voice ahhh♥️♥️
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Awww thank you so much!!!! I really really appreciate that, your support always means a lot to me!! Grateful for you, my amazing friend 🤗🖤
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This is a truly very stunning piece. These heartfelt words just uplifted my vibes. Your write-ups always inspire. Keep shining, Ace🤗
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Thank you so much, Anvi!! Awww I’m so touched to hear it…that’s always my hope with my work!! Appreciate you and your inspiring words, my dear friend!! Hugs and love 🤗🖤
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Flawless the rhyme and the flow. Beautiful Ace!
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Thank you so much!!!! Aww I’m so touched…truly grateful for your loving words and support!!! Your comments always bring a smile to my face 😁🤗. Much love 🖤🖤
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My pleasure Ace 🙂
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we are magnets, I loved that part Ace❣️ and like you said duality ✨ the image with this one, rainbow at the end of the road is perfect. and your voice!!! honey, butter, it’s something else💟💟💟
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Awww thank you so much, Aarushi!!! I really appreciate that, means a lot coming from one of my favorite poets!!! Ah haha, you are so sweet. You always leave the most thoughtful comments, thank YOU! Hugs, pal 🤗🖤🤍
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hugs 😊🥰
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love this 😍
And Your voice is so nice… It’s so clear and amazing… I have literally run out of words for commenting on all of your posts… They are immaculate! You deserve so much! Much love ♥️♥️
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Awww Geet, you words are always so inspiring, kind, loving and touching – I truly can’t thank you enough!!!! Your comments bring big smiles to my face 😁😁…ALWAYS! You’re a gem, my amazing friend! Love you 🖤🤗
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I trust me, beyond the rest. Loveeee. Super writing and amazing voice as always, Ace. Soothing is the word.
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Aww thank you so much!!! You are so kind, I deeply deeply appreciate your touching words!!! Your support inspires me, much love 🖤🤗
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Dear Ace, this is the best poem today!!!!
And am in awww of your voice ❤️❤️
I truly wish I can steal your voice and have it mine if only that’s possible…. 😄😄
Such a graceful voice you have. Please do spoken word regularly, It’s so lovely to hear ❤️❤️. And about the poem…. I am searching for a good word to describe it. 🧐🧐 Excellent poem dear Ace. ❤️❤️
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Dear Preeths, you make my week!!! What a sweet comment, I’m at a loss for words! Ahhhh I’m sure your voice is beautiful too, you’re the best!!! I will be doing it regularly, I promise you!!! Your encouragement truly has a special place in my soul and motivates me to be a better person! You are an amazing friend I feel so lucky to know!!! Appreciate you and your endless support. Love you 🖤🤗🤍
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very beautiful, lovely and heartwarming one ace ❤❤❤
I loved it 😍 ❤
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Aww thank you so much!!! So glad to hear you loved it and I truly appreciate your touching words, means more than I can say!!! Hugs and love, my dear friend 🖤🤗
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If I tried to repeat a few favorite lines out of this beautiful poem, I would end up repeating the entire poem, and I did read twice 🙂 it is incredible in depth and wisdom. You truly get the depth, sharpness and infinite ways of how truth, love and life are just different shades of our perceived experience of our being, it is a exchange of gifts between our Being and life itself. Incredible work dear Ace 💛
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Awwww what kind words, you’re amazing! That is so generous and thoughtful of you to say, I’m deeply touched! Thank you so much for your supportive words and treasure of a comment, means more than I can truly say!! It is you who also sees and gets that realization so beautifully/wisely…I am so honored you see it in me too. You deeply inspire me, my awesome friend. Big hugs and gratitude 🤗🖤🙏🏻
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So beautiful! Thank you
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Aww thank YOU!! I really appreciate you stopping by and your kind words, truly means a lot!! Hugs and love, my new friend 🖤🤗
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Hugs and love right back atcha 😁
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My Dear Ace 🥰
Once again you have left me speechless! Your vision and insight are a balm to the soul. I so enjoyed your spoken word!❤️ I am usually at a loss for words after I read one of your writings, and thus, I don’t comment much, for all these lovely souls have taken much of what I want to say out of my mouth. I will say, your spirit and your heart speak loudly and they are beauty and love personified! Keep filling us with your words. I love you❤️
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Auntie Marlene!!!! YOU leave me speechless!!! I am so beyond touched, I truly can’t thank you enough! I’m thrilled to hear you enjoyed the spoken word, really means a lot! Awww you are so kind and amazing…all your support has such a special place in my heart, ALWAYS!! So grateful for you and your touching encouragement, lucky to have you in my corner!!! You, your lovely spirit and your beautiful heart truly inspire me!! I love you 🖤🤗
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My darling girl, I am always and forever in your corner!!! Love you so, so much!❤️
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Wow! Another beautiful and elegant creation, dear Ace. You’ve delivers us all a stellar poem, with so much love and hope, and your spoken word is stunning. And, I ADORE the line “riding this star on a paradox.” Gorgeous!! Sending love!! ❤️🤗❤️
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Aww Jeff, thank you so much!!! You always leave the most thoughtful and special comments, I truly can’t thank you enough for all your support! Aww yay, so glad to hear it and so kind of you to quote it! 🤗 I appreciate you, my awesome friend!! Lots of love 🖤🤍
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You’re most welcome, dear Ace. Always! Thank you, that is so kind. It is a mirror, as I feel the same way about you, my dear friend. Sending love! ❤❤
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Beautiful and profound Ace! All the adjectives have already been used by our blogger friends 💖🤗
So true : Alone we may crawl and together we can fly. There is just no other way my dear and wise and loving friend 💖🤗
Keep shining your light and sharing your love ❤️
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Aww thank you so much, dear Ashok!!! That’s so kind of you. Your words are always always cherished in my heart and soul!! Yes indeed…awww you are the wise loving friend, my lovely Ashok!! 🤗 Here’s to flying together!!! Appreciate you and your always thoughtful support, means more than I can say!!! Lots of love and hugs, always 🤗🖤
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I am a loving friend who keeps praying for wisdom 😊💖🤗
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‘So as letting go offers its gentle hand
And a deeper me whispers in another land
I breathe in all my dualities
Playing in my dream’s realities’
I feel like you just invaded my mind to articulate all I couldn’t! This was such an amazing ending that stepped up the level of your already amazing poem.
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Those are my favorite lines too, of course we feel the same 😉! Awww that is so kind of you, really means a lot coming from such an amazing mind!!! I always appreciate your kind comments and support, truly means more than I can say. Much love, my dear friend 🤗🖤
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Wow darling Ace!! What a poem!! I’m blown away by your spoken word again! So beautiful and perfect and so clearly done!!! 😍😍. You are surely getting to be an Ace in the spoken word too!! 😉. Love the flow and depth of this one. Keep going and stay blessed dear ❤️❤️😘💐🙏🎁🌹🤗
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Awww Diana, I am blown away by your amazing comment again!!! Thank you so much!! Awww that’s so sweet and thoughtful, you’re the best! Really means a lot that you love the flow…your flows always inspire me!! Grateful for you and your loving support, as always! Love you, my dear friend 🤗🖤
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Ace, I love this poem of yours to the core coz it makes the beat to flow….true, “we” are the reflections….but at the same time, your intuition / inner intelligence knows you the best….this is powerful….immense knowledge & wisdom….the spoken word gives an extra dimension…..every single aspect is amplified….when I listen to your amazing voice….bright you are….as in a shining star….that can been seen from infinity….the energy can be sensed ✨🤍💫
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Awww Navin, thank you so much!!! I love how you say “the spoken word gives an extra dimension”…I have the same feeling about it and I’m really glad to know you feel that way!! Aww I never quite know how to answer your beyond touching comments, I’m always at a loss for words! Thank you for everything, my dear friend. So grateful for you and all the ways you support me. Much love, dear friend 🤗🖤
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You’re always welcome dear Ace….your spoken word are beyond magnificent….the combination of your lines & voice….I’m only reflecting what I sense….keep expressing from your beautiful heart, you beautiful being….there’s so much seeing in your sea….there are no layers when you sing eternity….it’s truth & purity you breathe….much love ✨ ❤️ 💫
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Dear ace this is sooo beautiful piece. U truly are a beautiful writer. Ur words Are soo powerful thay u actually don’t need to describe them cause they speak themselves. Bless u and thanks for making my day with this uplifting and I loved the theme. “Testing me” – * pausing for a second after reading this beautiful piece. 😅 I don’t know how to tell u I really enjoyed this piece. All I will say, keep writing such mind blowing pieces….❤️❤️
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Aww Anushka, YOU make my day!! What kind words, I’m so deeply touched!!! I’m smiling so big answering your sweet comment, I truly appreciate you. Your encouragement inspires me, my amazing friend!! Hugs and love 🤗🖤🤍
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Thanks a lot Ace! No problem at all my friend. I always encourage and read beautiful poems….
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Perfect. As things are.
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Thank you so much!!! I really appreciate you stopping by and commenting, means more than I can say. Hugs and love, my new friend 🤗🖤
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My God, so lovely verses, Ace. Simply sublime. You have a talent to paint with your beautiful words. So so beautiful. Keep shining, my friend 🤗😊💐
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Awww KK, that truly means a lot coming from one of my favorite poets!!! I’m deeply touched by your inspiring words and loving support, you’re awesome!!! Lots of love, my friend 🤗🖤
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Very good work! And good job reading this one! This opening really pulls the reader in. I love the unity and complexity to it, the realization that all things are interconnected!
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Aww Ben, your comments always leave me so touched and grateful!!! Thank you so much! I’m so glad to hear the spoken word added to it as that’s my hope. I truly appreciate you, my awesome friend. You inspire me 💚💙
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You’re welcome, Ace!!! Yes, it’s cool to hear how a poem envisions their poem sounding. So cool you’re adding this element to your posts. I do feel poems/writing is meant to be heard aloud. Again: really good work!! 💚💙
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Your poetry feels like a mirror that reflects the true beauty of life and shines a light on the hope that can be found within. Once again, my favourite lines ended up being at the end: “I breathe in all my dualities, playing in my dream’s realities.” You are the master of impactful and powerful poetry endings. Fantastic job on this poem, Ace! One of the favourite parts of my week is getting to read through all of the posts that you publish 💕 By the way, I also really appreciate the fact that you had the poem recorded as well – it feels nice to be able to experience it spoken in addition to reading it.
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Omg, I am at a loss for words!!! You always leave the best, most thoughtful and deeply kind comments – I can’t thank you enough!!! One of the best parts of my week is getting to connect with you!! The ending is my favorite too…aww I am so deeply honored to hear that! You are a gem, my dear friend. So grateful for you and your loving support, means more than I can say! And I’m so glad you liked the spoken word, I plan to keep it up! Lots of love, always 🤗🤗🖤🖤
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It’s mesmerising listening to it💙
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Awwwww 😊, thank you so much!!!! I really appreciate you going through my work, you’ve made my day!!! You’re special, my dear friend 🖤🤗
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I just don’t know how I have missed your posts, but divine timing, your page is incredible and your
words I feel them💛
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