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When I was created
The stars and space awaited
My soul chose this body’s suit
Together, we’re on this route

I wish I knew why
But maybe it’s in the eye
Something in me is waiting to fly
I can see the envisioned sky

Love chose me
I chose the key
Unlocking a deeper fate
Opening destiny’s gate

There’s a longing to be home
To forever escape this dome
I live in the beyond
Right now, we just correspond

Skin cloaked my divine glow
Bones clasped my eternal flow
When I chose this place
I savored the chase

Ace

And here’s the image version 💛

73 comments on “birth

  1. “Love chose me
    I chose the key
    Unlocking a deeper fate
    Opening destiny’s gate”
    Ace! This is so beautiful! And your voice…. I’m speechless!! I love your voice! So soothing ❤️❤️

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    1. Ace says:

      Aww Geet, thank you so much!!! I am speechless…I truly appreciate your loving support and touching words!! You are amazing!! Grateful for you, my incredible friend 🖤🤗 love you!

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  2. Filarance says:

    Oh my dear ace..!!!
    I’m speechless..!! Ahh my god..! I don’t have words to express your marvelous work..! You are the angel that god that send to this community..! You are the best..! You are the GEM..! You are a sweetheart..! You are a motivator..! Such a heart touching and brilliant and uplifting piece dear..! Such a excellent write my sweetie..! And I have one award “THE RHYMING QUEEN AWARD” Is goes to ace..! Wooohooo..! You are the rhyming queen my sweet..! The flow was really fantastic..! I love the rhyming very much..! It’s awesome..! And my dear friend, your voice..!!!!!😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍..!!!!
    I lost for words..! Your voice making my day very sweet..! Making my coffee tasty..! Your words gave me the feeling that some birds are singing and the honey is going inside my ears..! I can say this 1000+ times..! I’m truly saying..! If I was there right now surely I will hug you..! And you know..! Daily I’m not miss to hear your voice..! It’s making me happy and making me very calm..! I’m sure..! You are really an angel..! Keep shinning my beautiful friend..! Love you, my lovely ace..!🤗🤗💕💕

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    1. Filarance says:

      Wowww dear ace..! I didn’t stop to hear your voice..! Still hearing only my dear..! I’m speechless..! I don’t even know how to express my happiness after hearing your voice to you..!😍🤗🤗

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      1. Ace says:

        Awwwww ☺️ Filarance, I have no words!! You are the sweetest, thank you so much for listening!!! I appreciate you and all your love/support so very much, words can’t describe 🖤🖤

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      2. Filarance says:

        It’s absolutely my pleasure my sweetie..!🤗🤗

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    2. Ace says:

      Awww my dear Filarance, I am seriously speechless!! YOU are the best! Awww I love my award, thank you so much! I always love to rhyme and it means a lot to me that you notice. I have an award for you: THE BRIGHTEST SUN!! You shine so brightly and beautifully, every time I look at the sun I think of you!! Aww you are always so sweet about my voice…words can’t describe how much it means to me!! I am eternally grateful to you, the smile on my face will never leave!! All your special comments and precious support will live on in my soul forever!!! YOU inspire me!!!! Love you so much, my beautiful friend 🖤🤗

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      1. Filarance says:

        Wowww..! Thank a million my dear..! Woww..! You words touched me deeply..! It’s means to the world to me dear..! Woww..! My sweetie..! Love you dear ace..! I’m speechless..! I’m flattered by your words..! Wow..! I’m very happy dear I will always give smile to your face my dear..! Woww..! I can’t forget about you my sweetie..! You are incredible soul..! You are an angel.. I will always inspire you my sweetie..! Love you..!🤗🤗

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  3. BookWorm says:

    Such a deep and wonderful poem! It has a hint of austere feelings, of birth, of death and of the cause of our mysterious existence. I loved it!!

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    1. Ace says:

      Aww thank you so much!!! I am so happy to hear you loved it, that truly means a lot!! Grateful for you and your supportive comment, dear friend! Much love 🖤🤗

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  4. Your voice adds another dimension to your wonderful impact you have on all of us.🙏🏾🤗

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    1. Ace says:

      Aww thank you so much, my awesome friend! I am so glad to hear that 😊, what touching words. Your comments always mean a lot to me, I appreciate you 🖤🤗

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      1. Thanks, friend! You have a wonderful way with words. I appreciate you as well🙏🏾🤗

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  5. How sweet is this song! Dear Ace, you are incredible. ❤️❤️ Your voice is super cute which is why I heard more than twice. 👏
    This is deep and beautiful. Keep up the great work. Much love my dear friend. 🤝

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    1. Ace says:

      Awww Preeths, thank you so much!!! You are so sweet…I always appreciate your thoughtful, loving and supportive comments! Words really can’t describe how grateful I am for all your support since the beginning, YOU are incredible!! Love you 🖤🤗

      PS – Wanted to tell you…my copy of Utmost Feelings arrived today and I absolutely loved your delightful poems!!! You are such a spectacular writer, my dear Preeths! I especially loved “Won’t You Please”, what an empowering message!!! Thank you for sharing your lovely gift with the world 🖤

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      1. My pleasure knowing you and it’s the universe which connects us dear Ace. ❤️

        Awww… You got it already?! Thank you so much for your support. It means so much to me dear. You are a loving soul and an amazing friend. Words can’t express how much it means to me. ❤️❤️
        Love you to the moon and back. 😘😘

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      2. Ace says:

        Yeah, it came early and I’m so happy it did ☺️! Of course, my dear friend…I’m always supporting you! It was an absolute pleasure reading your superb work, love you to the beyond 🖤🤗🥰

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  6. vaniheart says:

    Such a deep and wonderful one ❤❤❤❤

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    1. Ace says:

      Thank you so much, my dear friend!! I really appreciate your kind words, much love 🖤🤗

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  7. MarleneSevArt says:

    When you were created, we were blessed! Beautiful and touching as always!

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    1. Ace says:

      Aww Auntie Marlene, thank you so much!!! What touching words!!! Your special comments and support always mean the world to me, I am so grateful for you!!! Love you 🖤🖤🤗🤗

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  8. Wow, Ace!!! I LOVE it!!!! The magical flow and feeling in this poem is amazing. “Skin cloaked my divine glow, Bones clasped my eternal flow” these lines are awesome. Magnificent piece, my dear friend. ❤️❤️❤️

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    1. Ace says:

      Thank you so much, my dear friend!! So glad to hear you love it, that truly means a lot! Those are my favorite lines too, so touched by you quoting them!! I always appreciate your support, you’re amazing 🖤🤗

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      1. Always a pleasure.💕

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  9. The story of birth, so beautifully described. Well done, Ace 😃❤️

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    1. Ace says:

      Thank you so much, dear Shweta!! Your support really means a lot, appreciate you! 🖤🤗

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      1. You’re very welcome, dear ❤️🤗

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  10. Ace!! What a treat to hear your voice reciting this beautiful poem of birth, It made it even that much fuller, that much richer, along with the imagery..it’s just gorgeous! My favorite lines, by the way are these:
    “I live in the beyond
    Right now, we just correspond”
    I love that and I do understand that too..believe me:)
    Big hugs and love your choices and where your muse leads you:)
    ❤️🤗🌹🌺

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    1. Ace says:

      Awww Karima, what a treat it is to read your beautiful comment!!! I am always so touched by your support, YOU inspire me!! I’m so happy to hear that about the spoken word, means more than I can say! Also glad to hear you relate to those lines…been feeling them strongly lately 🤪. Appreciate you and your kind words, you truly are amazing 🖤🤗

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  11. Navin says:

    You know, I was cooking my evening meal….when your name popped up on my screen….this poem of yours took my breath away….I can feel the light dancing inside my dark space….and then I switched on my BT speaker to listen to your beautiful voice….I didn’t listen just once but it’s more than thrice….there’s no doubt, this is my favorite poem of all times….I can see, you birthed this Universe with your sparkling eyes….you’re showing us deeper & magical reality through the envisioned sky….you live in the beyond & this is beyond beautiful rhyme….Oh my dear friend Ace, you’re truly divine….much love to you & my gratitude for sharing your shining lines 🙏🖤✨🤍💫❤️

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    1. Ace says:

      Aww Navin, this special comment leaves me speechless. I can feel the light dancing in me while reading your beyond touching words!!! Omg, you’re favorite of all times?!? I am so honored and inspired, this means more than I can say! You are so thoughtful and deeply kind…your words have found an eternal home in my soul!!! Grateful for you, always. Thank you for everything 🙏🏻🖤🤗

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      1. Diana says:

        I agree with Navin, wholeheartedly!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️🥰🤗

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      2. Navin says:

        My gratitude to you for writing such a profound poem & reciting it….it’s my favorite poem of all times….even though, different poems & styles can’t be compared….this poem speaks to me at so many different levels….and then your magical voice….it adds this extra dimension….as if the poem wasn’t already magical & multidimension….Much love to you, dear Ace 🙏✨🖤💫🤍

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  12. Msdedeng says:

    Impressive my friend. Wow!

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    1. Ace says:

      Thank you so much, my friend!!! I’m so touched by your comment, truly! Much love and hope you’re well 🖤🤗

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  13. Jeff Flesch says:

    Ah, such a lovely piece. I so love hearing you read your poems, my dear friend, so wonderful. This here,
    “Skin cloaked my divine glow
    Bones clasped my eternal flow
    When I chose this place
    I savored the chase,” is so beautiful. Just beautiful, dear Ace. 🤗❤🤗

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    1. Ace says:

      Thank you so much, my dear Jeff!!! You are so kind, I’m deeply touched by your loving words. You continue to inspire me, my amazing friend! So kind of you to quote it, that’s my favorite part too. Appreciate you, always! Much love 🖤🤗

      PS – My copy of Utmost Feelings arrived today and I absolutely LOVE your poem! The way you weave in “fingertips” is so beautiful and deeply soulful. You are a one of kind writer and thank you for sharing your ever-lasting gift with the world 🖤

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      1. Jeff Flesch says:

        Ah, my dear Ace, my heart is filled by your words, as always! I am so pleased to know you received your copy of Utmost Feelings today. How beautiful, thank you my dearest friend, for your kind words, always.

        You’re most welcome, Ace always. Reading your work is a pleasure and treat to me, I love it so. Sending love and hugs. 🤗❤️🤗

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  14. Hitesh.C.K says:

    🤩🤩🤩 excellent piece my sister. Every birth has a meaning, a destiny and its in our hands to go in pursuit of it. Really liked it ☺️ you truly are an amazing talent and your poems make me forget my worries and to get along. Thank you sister 🥰 have a great time. Keep inspiring 😌

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    1. Ace says:

      Awww brother, thank you so much!!! “Every birth has a meaning, a destiny and it’s in our hands to go in pursuit of it,”-that is so powerfully said…you have so much wisdom in you, I can’t wait for the day you open your blog!!! Awww ☺️ I am so touched and happy to hear that, you make my day. Your comments make me forget my worries! So grateful for you, always! Thank you for everything 🙏🏻🖤🤗

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      1. Hitesh.C.K says:

        You are always welcome sister😌🤗

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  15. This is exquisite beautiful dear Ace. I am deeply touched and stunned by the beauty and the depth that exudes from your poem. You are so wise and knowing, aware of the delicate intricacies of our existence, you hold and weave it such energy of gratitude, my heart just so full with reading this poem. Amazing Ace truly amazing ✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨

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    1. Ace says:

      Aww thank you so much!!!! I am deeply touched by your loving comment!!! I truly can’t thank you enough!!! It’s your wisdom and knowing that inspires me, truly! I am elated to hear that, you bring huge smiles to my heart! Grateful for you and all your loving words, much love 🖤🤗

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      1. 💛💛💛💛🤗🤗🤗🙌🏼

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  16. akshita1776 says:

    Wow!! I am bowled over 🤩❤

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    1. Ace says:

      Aww thank you so much! You always leave the sweetest comments, appreciate you! 🖤🤗

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  17. Kritika says:

    Enjoyed the opening paragraph.
    ‘There’s a longing to be home’ resonates.
    Beautifully crafted.

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    1. Ace says:

      Thank you so much, my dear Kritika!! Your kind comments always touch me deeply, appreciate you! Much love 🖤🤗

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      1. Kritika says:

        My pleasure always 🙂

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  18. The whole poem resonated so deep in my heart. And ask me nothing about your voice okay? It’s sooo therapeutic, soothing and I loved it!!
    I can’t quote any favourite lines when the whole poem turned out to be my favourite!!

    Do give an voiceover to every poem of yours! 🥺
    This post made my day ❤️

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    1. Ace says:

      Omg you make my day!!! What a touching and sweet comment, I can’t thank you enough!! You’re the best! Words really can’t describe how much your support and kindness means to me, I am so grateful! Awwww ☺️, I will try! I’m thrilled to hear that, you made my day 🖤🖤🤗

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      1. Lots of love! ❤️

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  19. kimmagic says:

    The last stanza is golden 👏🏽👏🏽

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    1. Ace says:

      Aww thank you so much!! That means the world to me, grateful for you 🖤🤗

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  20. KK says:

    I liked the idea of the poem, that in itself is very deep and profound. Loved the flow, both in words and voice. As usual, an excellent work, Ace👌👌💐

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    1. Ace says:

      Thank you so much, my dear KK!! I’m so happy to hear you loved it, truly means a lot! I’m always so deeply touched by your kind comments, you’re amazing 🖤🖤🤗

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  21. Ah, such a clear reading. Love this part: “I live in the beyond / Right now, we just correspond”. Well and lots of other parts. This one really functions beautifully throughout. One of my favorites of yours. Amazing creation!

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    1. Ace says:

      Awww Ben, I’m so happy to know this is one of your favorites of mine…makes my evening!! Thank you so much!! Words really can’t describe how much your kind support means, you truly inspire me. Thanks for always being there, my friend 💚💙

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      1. You’re welcome! I can see why it’s a favorite. You birthed something beautiful and captivating. Good job by you yet again! 💚💙

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  22. Rahul Gaur says:

    How do you do it every time!? Every word is there for a reason and it all flows perfectly ❤

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    1. Ace says:

      Aww Rahul, thank you so much!!! You’re so kind and that truly means a lot coming from a master of flow! Appreciate you and your support, always 🖤🖤

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  23. Diana says:

    My goodness!! Your voice is so magical and I almost felt like the universe was flowing through me!! Very beautiful and gorgeous imagery throughout this amazing poem, Ace! May you continue shining your light and love always. Stay blessed dear✨✨❤️💫🙏🥰😘

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    1. Ace says:

      Aww Diana ☺️, you leave me so deeply touched!!!! That means so much to me as your work as always does that to my soul! Thank you so much!!! I am always grateful for your special comments and support, you truly are the best!!!! Love you, my dear friend 🖤🤗

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  24. I really enjoyed this poem about birth and creation. I especially liked how you described the body mostly as merely a suit or an outer layer for your soul which was already there. It’s almost like your body was just a formailty necessary for entering this world from the last one. I especially liked the lines:
    “Skin cloaked my divine glow
    Bones clasped my eternal flow”

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    1. Ace says:

      Thank you so much, my dearest friend!! Aww I am so so happy to hear that. Yes, I wanted to get the message across that you are more than your “human suit”…you are divine and beyond form!! So thank you for truly seeing this piece and for your thoughtful words. You are seriously amazing and I really can’t describe my gratitude to you 🖤🖤

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  25. skylinerise says:

    I loved your post so much! Amazing 👏🙀

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    1. Ace says:

      Aww thank you so much!!! I’m so touched by your kind visit and words, means more than I can say!! Much love, new friend 🖤🤗

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      1. skylinerise says:

        You are most welcome dear friend😊😊😊. You must jeep writing and I will be your trusted reader !! 😊❤✌

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      2. Ace says:

        Aww you are so sweet!! Thank you so much! I will always keep writing! I’m your trusted reader forever too, you have a beautiful site!! 🖤🤗

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      3. skylinerise says:

        I am glad to hear that😊😊😊. You are most welcome dear friend!!

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