Fearless Free Soul

flawless

I’ve thought about this poem all day
There’s just too much to say
Won’t be perfect, but I’ll let my heart splay
Hoping it’ll take away confusion’s stay
I love when I can play in mystery
Because clarity is history
Most days I love the up and down
Today, that love has yet to be found
This world is a cage
Perpetually lying on its stage
People are being controlled
Free thinking has been sold
Listening to what they’re told
Love, power and freedom is old
Maybe I’m the weird one
For stepping out of this stun
The world isn’t all of it
Simply just a bit
I don’t live in this world, I live in mine
Reality is missing my design
And not quite ready to re-align
When the clutter ends
I’ll remember it’s meant to be
Presenting themselves as friends
Tests are what I choose to see
I’ll miss you on this specific date
We used to walk through this very gate
I hear your voice
As I make every choice
I know you’re still watching
It’s not that shocking
We get to talk in my dreams
Then our realities split at the seams
Thank you for being on my path
Today it feels so new, the aftermath
I knew this wouldn’t be flawless
At least I could sit in my solace
Emotions are gifts
Embracing my shifts

Ace

And here’s the image version 💛. This piece is a mixture of my state of mind, remembering the tests are meant to be and missing a soul who’s passed on. I hope it reminds you to be fearless and free in embracing all your shifts -Ace

Grace

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62 responses to “flawless”

  1. You have written it so beautifully yet again! We have our own realities and worlds, and everyone has a right to be different! I just love the way you portray the words with an awesome picture!

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  2. This was another flawless work from my sister. Really what excellent piece it is. I had a lot to learn 😊 your posts are always ever inspiring ☺️
    “I don’t live in this world, I live in mine” 😍😍😍
    Thank you once again sister 🥰

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  4. Wow wow wow wow..! My dear ace, I really loved loved loved this piece..! Such a marvelous poem..! Very important too..! And this is the master piece..! You are my rhyming queen my sweetie..! Ahhh! I’m speechless..! You are the Brighting star..! Here is one award for you..! “The rhyming queen in this world award” goes to ACE..! My lovable ace..! My sweetheart..! My bestie..! I’m so lucky to call you bestie..! You are a Queen..! And this poem is very powerful my dear..! “I don’t live in this world, I live in mine” This is very powerful my sweetie..! My Cinderella..! My princess..! Such a excellent write my beautiful friend..! Yes, world will not give happiness for us..! World will not give money..! World will not give food etc..! We are thinking that if we did this, this world will talk wrong about us..! But that’s wrong..! Life is once..! So we have to live our life happy..! This became my favourite poem of yours my dear..! I have a big list of your poems..! Each and every poems became my favourite dear..! You are an angel..! Love you so much, my lovely friend..!🤗🤗💕

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    • Awww Filarance, how do you leave me so touched every single time?!? You are just the best!! I am speechless!!! Thank you so much for everything, my bestie!!! I’m so lucky to call you bestie too!! I’m so happy to hear that, your support means more than I can say!!! Here’s to living our lives with happiness always!!! Thank you for always inspiring and motivating me, you’re amazing!!! Grateful for you, always!!! Love you, my incredible friend 🖤🤗

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      • Wowww..! My dear ace, we are connected by our hearts..! Each and every words of mine is coming from my heart..! You’re very welcome my dear bestie..! It’s absolutely my pleasure my sweetie..! I will always make you inspire and motivate you my sunshine..! Love you, my beautiful Cinderella..!🤗🤗

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  5. Magnificent piece , Ace! I absolutely loved it!!! I have to share my favorite lines with you (as I often do) but I must tell you that it was very difficult to just pick one “Tests are what I choose to see.” So profound. You are such a brilliant talent, always keep shining dear friend.❤️

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  6. Dear Ace, this is spectacular. ❤️❤️
    Your writings are becoming flawless….😍😍😍 I love the flow and the rhyming is spot on..👍 Mixed emotions are well penned. ❤️❤️❤️

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    • Aww Preeths, YOU are just flawless!!! Thank you so much, my special friend!! Words really can’t describe how much your support and loving encouragement mean to me, I’m always so truly touched! Thank you for being beautifully YOU. Love you 🖤🤗

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  7. If divine is the weird one, then you’re truly the weird one….I’m picking up on your stunning poem at so different levels…. it has such a beautiful flow…..love, sadness, truth, your reality…..how you define the World….how you see the Universe….Universe is in YOU…I love this poem of yours, dear Ace 🖤💫🤍🤗

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    • Awww Navin ☺️, what a touching thing to say!!! I can’t even explain how much that means to me, you’re the best!! So happy to hear you love this one, thank you so so much! Yes, there’s a lot packed into this one 🤪. Grateful for you and your loving support, always!! You truly inspire me, my dear friend 🖤🤗

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    • Thank you so much, dear Rabbia!! Yes indeed, aww you’re so kind to tie in the blog name…I’m deeply touched! Appreciate you and your support 🖤🤗

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  10. Magical, powerful, elegant, and raw, all at the same time! I love this poem, dearest Ace. And the last two lines are, as always, stunning. You continue to step into vulnerability and inside of that space, anything is possible. I love it!! Sending love and hugs!! ❤🤗❤

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    • Thank you so much, my lovely friend!!! Awww you are so kind 😊, and I really appreciate you noticing my steps in vulnerability…definitely something I’ve been working on lately! So grateful for you and all your special comments, means the world to me. Hugs and love 🖤🤗

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  11. The world isn’t all of it
    Simply just a bit
    I don’t live in this world, I live in mine
    Reality is missing my design

    These lines hold so much power of your potency, you owning it, in the middle of this honest vulnerable poem!! The word Celebrations came to me my mind – to celebrate any ‘weird’ you are, it is truly amazing kind. Loved the conclusion too – all emotions are such gifts in that how they guide us. Embracing the shifts shows the brilliance in this vulnerability. Very beautiful.

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    • Awww you make my day!! Thank you so very much! Aww that is so kind…I really appreciate you sharing that “celebrations” came to you…I’m so touched, and here’s to celebrating our ‘weirdness’! I hope you know just how much your precious support and loving comments mean to me – my heart always smiles when I see your name pop up 🖤🖤🤗🤗

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    • Awwww ☺️ what a special comment!!! You are so sweet and I am forever grateful for your touching support!!! YOU are flawless, truly! Much love, always 🖤🤗

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  13. I love after thinking all day you let your mind run free in an almost free style hip hop then, a few things you had to say, returning to love, maybe between someone not still of this earthly plane. I understood that and related to that too by these lines:”I know you’re still watching
    It’s not that shocking
    We get to talk in my dreams” It was like taking a peek into your mind and beyond…The fun rhyme scheme in the first part was different for you..I love you just let it flow as it may…that always works..especially when you are a talented poet…which Ace,,,you so are!! better than flawless..it;s beyond flaws❤️🤗🙏🌹🌟🦋

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    • Aww Karima, you make my day!!! You are simply the BEST!! What kind and touching words, I am so very grateful!! Yes, the ending is about a soul who no longer lives in this realm…I truly appreciate your thoughtful read! You’re so kind, thank you for journeying into my mind through this one 😉😊!! It does indeed always work…awww that means the world to me!!! Your beyond special comments always have a place in my heart and soul – so grateful for you and your better than flawless being 🖤🤗🥰

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  14. Let us not hesitate to stand out from the rest by being true to, as well as just being ourselves!

    Such a lovely, well written and well structured poem ❤

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  15. Really flawless, and beautiful rhyming makes flow free. ‘I don’t live in this world, I live in mine’ is wonderful. Being the self is not only a choice, but a talent in itself. The design of image version is superb. Well done, Ace, once again👌👌💐

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    • Awww KK, thank you so much!!! I love how you say it’s a talent…it very much is a skill indeed!! I really appreciate you mentioning the image version, glad you love it!!! As always, your loving support and words means the world to me! Much love, dear friend 🖤🤗

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  16. Beautiful and elegantly written, Ace! Wonderful use of emotions, and self-evaluation within this. I love how you started it and loved how you ended it, even more! Well done, bubby! Stay blessed ❤️🌹🤗😘🙏

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    • Aww thank you so much, my special Diana!!! I’m elated to hear you love it, means the world to me! Your comments always bring big smiles to my face and heart, you’re the best!!! Love you, dear friend 🖤🤗

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  18. Accepting self is the best help for self. Owning your own thoughts, opinions, is who you are. We all are weird in our own ways. Our acceptance is the only stage. Left untouched.
    The thought displayed gorgeously.

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  20. This is heartbreaking: “We get to talk in my dreams / Then our realities split at the seams”. What a nice positive ending. Lots of feelings and emotions going on here, but you’re truly embracing the “up and down” of life. Wonderful as always. Take care of yourself! Have a wonderful start to your weekend!

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    • Thank you so much, Ben!! Yeah it is a little heartbreaking 🤪, was in that kind of mood yesterday 😆. Awww that’s so kind, I’m working on it. Your support and always kind words truly inspire me and leave me so touched, you’re just awesome. Much love and have a wonderful weekend 💚💙

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      • Well, this flowed out of you and it’s cool that it did. I just got the sense of be flawless even with our flaws. You’re doing amazing in everything. Stay true to yourself and I know you will. 💚💙

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    • Aww thank you so much!!! I’m so glad to hear that, I really appreciate your thoughtful read and supportive words…means a lot! Hugs and love, dear friend 🖤🤗

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  22. I LOVED this one! I love when thoughts walk the line between chaotic and organized – heart-felt and wildly passionate. There were so many different truths in this poem all stacked up on one another. The structure made it seem a little like you were breathless and rushing to get the words out and I love how that came across. The style and tone of this poem was so unique and I ended up really liking it 😊

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    • Aww thank you so much!! I am so happy to hear that. Yes, you know my writing very well, my dear friend 😊😉…this one definitely has more of my state of mind in it. Definitely had to get it out, and writing will always be there for us to do that!! Your support means more than I can say, I am always so touched by your loving words! Thank you for everything, dear friend 🙏🏻🖤

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