If you added all the time I spend
Staring at a screen
wondering what to write
You’d be rich with infinite hours
If you added all the time I spend
shuffling through thoughts
and organizing lyrics
You’d be timelessly immortal
If you subtracted all the times I spent
doubting myself
and my capability
I’d forget all the different versions of me
If you subtracted all the times I spent
hesitating to breathe
and to smile
I’d forget my adventurous journey
If you multiplied all the time I spend
reflecting on who I am
and how far I’ve come
You’d lose all track of the clock
If you multiplied all the time I spend
exploring what ifs
and dancing in unknowns
You’d win a countless supply of heartbeats
If I divided all the times I spent
learning to live
and learning to love
I’d have a montage of what it means to be me
If I divided all the times I spent
tying moments of my life together
and connecting the dots in all my stars
I’d see when I discovered to trust the mystery
-Grace
44 responses to “math”
Oh this is so good and relatable Grace! ❣️
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Thanks so much, Cindy!! Truly appreciate it 🤍🤗🫶🏻
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You’re so welcome Grace! ❤️
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Wow! Amazing. So heartfelt and wise. I absolutely love this, Grace. Wonderful.💕
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Thanks so much, dear Grace! So happy you loved this one, truly means a lot to me coming from you! Appreciate you, dear friend 🤍🤗
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Always a pleasure, my friend.💕🙏💕
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We do spend a lot of time in self reflection, it’s an essential part of growth I guess..a great write!
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Indeed, Cassa…it’s one of my favorite things to ponder about 😊. Appreciate your thoughtful support always, dear friend 🤍🤗
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Whoaaa…this is brilliant❤️❤️❤️
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Aww thanks so much!!! Your kind words mean a lot to me 🤍🤗🤍🤗
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I think math is spiritual, so I really enjoyed all the concepts and your musings! Some great imagery, such as “a montage of what it means to be me” when we dissect time in all the ways our mind works. The stream of consciousness flows in this one, even with all those multiplications and divisions, etc. Well done! ✒️
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Always a treat reading your thoughtful comments, Tricia! Thank you for being such an amazing reader, I’m so grateful for your support. Ahh I’m so happy to hear that, “stream of consciousness” brings a big smile 🤍🤗. Lots of love and gratitude 🫶🏻🫶🏻
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My pleasure, always!! 🥰
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I love the way the traditional elements of math (addition, subtraction, multiplication, and division) play into this timely poem and lend a meaning to each stanza as it makes up the whole of this lovely piece! 🙂
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Aww Layla, thank you so very much!!! I’m so happy to hear that you enjoyed the blend of math and meaning! Grateful for you and your lovely support that light up my days 🤗🤍🤗🤍
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Ditto the other comments here… wonderful Grace… relatable and honest but with that signature flourish of hope. 🙏❤️
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Aww thank you so much, dearest Lia!!! You are the sweetest, truly appreciate you and your touching words 🤗🤍🤗
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Beautiful and deep all round, but that last stanza is truly moving. Your talent is peerless, Grace. Thanks for sharing this with us, my friend. 🙂
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Aww thanks so much Mike! Your comments always mean the world to me! Thank YOU for thoughtfully reading and for this amazing comment. I appreciate you 🤍🤗🤍🤗
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A Math masterpiece Grace❤️🤩💯💯I really loved the way you connected the basic four operations of Math i.e. addition, subtraction, multiplication and division with life🥺💯🤩 It’s so true and beautiful ☺️
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Awww Karan!!!!! I was thinking about you…been missing your posts, my friend!! Thank you for such kind and encouraging words, means more than I can say 🤍🤗🤍🤗
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As we reflect on ourselves we realize that it is not enough just to live life, but to understand that in every instant a mystery is solved.
Hugs from afar, Grace.
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Thank you so much, Lincol! I love your wise words here. Always appreciate your thoughtful comments 🤍🤗
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It’s a pleasure to read you and I look forward to continuing to read you.
Good day 🤗
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I absolutely love this poem, dearest Grace, and that final line is perfect. Happy weekend, my friend! 🤍🤗🤍
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Aww thanks so much, Jeff!!! So happy to hear you love this one, truly means a lot! Happy weekend to you too, dear friend 🤍🤗
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🤩🤩🤩 this is a very relatable poem Grace. Especially the last paragraph🤩
Thank you sister for such a wonderful piece.😇
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Thank YOU so very much, dear Hitesh!!! Your comments and kind words always have a very special place in my heart! Appreciate you 🤍🤗
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Nice post🙂
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Thank you for reading and appreciating! 🤍🤗
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Woah!! Love what you have done here, dear Grace. Your mathematical equations and conclusions are just the most unique way of summing up the very essence of your totality… you!! Love what gets added, subtracted, multiplied….and yes even divided like this line:
“If I divided all the times I spent
learning to live
and learning to love
I’d have a montage of what it means to be me”
This whole poem, the entire equation is a montage of who you are. I love that you are so aware of yourself, that you can be put into these fantastic equations. Stunning! No wonder we love you:):) 🌹🌟🌹
P.S. Where’s my coffee? (hehe)
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Awww Karima, thank you so very much for such a special comment!!! I am so truly touched. Thank you for truly seeing this piece is in all its meanings, I always feel so grateful to be read by you. Self awareness is something so important to me and I’m constantly learning more and more, you’re so kind to notice! Awww ☺️, I feel so grateful to connect with this community and with YOU. Haha coffee next time 😊. Thank you for being you and for your beautiful support 🤍🤗
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As a math lover, I truly enjoyed this poem! Beautifully and strategically done, Grace! 👏
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Aww thank you so much, dear friend! I’m so happy to hear that, truly means a lot. Appreciate you 🤍🤗
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I had not come across such a math with spiritual tinge, in a self exploratory mode. I agree this life is a mystery. The poem is deep and meaningful, and the last stanza wins the heart. Simply stunning! A masterpiece, Grace! Thoroughly enjoyed.
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Aww KK, that is so kind! Thank you so very much. I appreciate you and your always special comments, brings big smiles inside and out 🤍🤗🤍🤗
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Always my pleasure, Grace 💖
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A beautifully rendered poem, Grace. I love the title and image too, they complete the whole write so well 🙂 My favourite lines:
“If you added all the time I spend
Staring at a screen
wondering what to write
You’d be rich with infinite hours”
“If you multiplied all the time I spend
exploring what ifs
and dancing in unknowns
You’d win a countless supply of heartbeats”
❤
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Aww thank you so much for sharing your favorite lines, that means more than I can say!!!! So happy to hear you loved this one, brings big smiles inside and out 🤍🤗🤍🤗
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You’re welcome! ☺️🧡 And my pleasure! 🌟
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So good! You definitely have reached another level!
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Aww thank you so much, Ben!!! That brings a big smile inside and out. Appreciate you!!
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Welcome! You deserve the best!
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