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I wish I knew me when I was young
The me that didn’t exist in this time
But in a song the stars sung
Who’s the me that started this climb?

I wish I knew me when I was old
A story, a timeline already told
The me existing beyond form
In destiny’s soothing swarm

I wish I knew all of me
The me who’s alive in that bee
The me who’s roots spread like a tree
And the infinite me eyes can’t see

I wish I knew my divinity
My internal eternity
Take me to a place
A structureless space

I know me
A part who chose to be
In this life, as this soul
That’s enough to be whole

Ace

And here’s the image version 🖤

69 comments on “versions of me

  1. nushhe says:

    its really beautiful! I loved ur vision about being you. 😊❤ Lovved it ACE

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    1. Ace says:

      Aww thank you so much!!! You’re so kind, I’m truly happy to hear that!!! Appreciate you and your support, always!!! Hugs and love, amazing friend 🖤🤗

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  2. akshita1776 says:

    Ahhh the last line!!! Loovveed it to the chore

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    1. nushhe says:

      i also loved that line!!!

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    2. Ace says:

      Awww thank you so much!!!!! Your kind words bring a big smile to my face, grateful for your support!!! And I’m so glad to hear that, means a lot!!!! Much love 🖤🤗

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  3. Stunning piece, Ace. I loved each and every line of this beautifully expressed poem. Absolutely wonderful! I love the pattern and flow here and the awesome ending!!! Superb!! The elegance, grace, intrinsic beauty, universal love and depth in all your pieces are just amazing and so inspiring! Keep shining my friend.❤️

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    1. Ace says:

      Thank you so much, Grace!!!! Your support and kindness is always truly appreciated!!! I am deeply touched and grateful for all the love you shower me with, so blessed to know you! Ah I remember saying something very similar to you the other day 😉, so glad you see the same!!! Hugs and love, my inspiring friend 🖤🤗🤍

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      1. Always a pleasure. I truly am very happy to have connected with you as well. So funny that we have similar responses to each other’s work but I guess great minds think alike.😊.Much love to you my friend.💕🙏💕

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  4. Wow, dear Ace!!! This is the best, of all your creations until today. 👏👏👏
    I so loved it from the start until the end.
    You have my all love and hugs for this beautiful poem. Keep writing…. Keep inspiring! 🤗😍

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    1. Ace says:

      Aww Preeths, thank you so much!!! I am so glad to hear that!!! You are the best, most kind and super thoughtful friend – I am beyond grateful for you!!! Thank you for always being in my corner and inspiring me, you’re a gem!! Always touched by your support, much love 🖤🤗

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  5. vaniheart says:

    so beautiful ❤❤❤

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    1. Ace says:

      Thank you so much!!! That means a lot, appreciate you 🖤🤗

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  6. Geet says:

    You’re the best, ACE!!! I LOVED the last line! ♥️ Gr(ace)fully written! Such a beautiful peice. You’re a perfect writer, Ace! 🤗 Much love to you, my friend 💖

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    1. Ace says:

      GEET, you make my day!!! Thank you so much!!!! I am incredibly grateful for you, your sweet comments always leave me deeply touched!!! Awwww that means a lot, truly inspires me 🖤🤗. Love you, my amazing friend 💖🥰

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  7. KK says:

    It’s easy to know others, but not one that is inside. Interesting and Beautiful verses. Good one ☝️

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    1. Ace says:

      Thanks so much, KK. Yes, exactly…wisely said, my friend! I always appreciate your thoughtfully kind support and words, brightens my days!!! You’re truly awesome, much love 🖤🤗🤍

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      1. KK says:

        You are welcome my friends 😊

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  8. This is some deep thought Ace. Afterall we all carry stars within us. I loved this post. I read it so many times. Brilliant work.

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    1. Ace says:

      Aww yay, thank you so much!!! I’m so glad to hear that!!! YES we do, we are the stars!!! Appreciate you and your kind connections, so lucky to know you!!! Hugs and love, amazing friend 🖤🤗

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      1. Pleasure is all mine ❤️🤗

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  9. Jeff Flesch says:

    Oh!! I love this poem, dear Ace. It is beautiful, and the imagery you created for me of the human connection to all things was powerful and lovely. Wonderful, wonderful. Well done!!! ❤🤗❤

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    1. Ace says:

      Aww thank you so much!!! I’m so happy to hear that as it was my hope with this piece!!! I’m always so grateful for your deeply kind support, you’re just amazing!!! Thank you for always being there, my friend!!! Much love 🖤🤗🤍

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      1. Jeff Flesch says:

        You’re welcome, Ace! Always, always, my dear friend. Have a wonderful week!! ❤️✨🤗

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  10. MariaTeresa says:

    The message here defies space and time, simple and pure. This is love on display❤ I love this one Ace, bravo 👏

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    1. Ace says:

      Aww thank you so much!!!! You are so kind!!! I deeply appreciate you, my friend!!! Your loving words and support go a long way, truly!!! Hugs and love, my amazing friend 🖤🤗. You inspire me!

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      1. MariaTeresa says:

        I’m happy to hear that, my pleasure always 🥰

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  11. Cassa Bassa says:

    What a beautiful line – “The me that didn’t exist in this time
    But in a song the stars sung” 💚

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    1. Ace says:

      Thank you so much!!! Those are my favorite lines too. Your support truly means a lot, especially from such a talented writer like you!!! Hugs and love, my friend 🖤🤗

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      1. Cassa Bassa says:

        🤗 let’s keep the supportive community going 💚

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  12. Hitesh.C.K says:

    Well That was again another excellent piece, my sister!!! Flowing through different timelines and then back to soul… just loved it 😍
    “I know me
    A part who chose to be
    In this life, as this soul
    That’s enough to be whole” This was the ‘cherry on the top’😍Thank you!!!

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    1. Ace says:

      Aww thank you so much!!!! Your comments are such a blessing to me…you’ve brightened my day, brother!!!! Ah I’m so glad to hear that!!! You are so kind, appreciate you so much!!! Always deeply touched by your thoughtful/loving support, means a lot! Hope you’re well and life’s good!!! Hugs and love 🖤🤗💫

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      1. Hitesh.C.K says:

        Thank you sister 😊😊😊 I am doing great. Hope you are well and happy 🤗😃

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      2. Ace says:

        So good to hear!!!! I am well, thank you! Riding with the waves the Universe brings my way!! So lovely to have a brother like you 🙏🏻🖤🤗

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      3. Hitesh.C.K says:

        Thank you 😍 you made my day sister!!! have a great day😊

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  13. kimmagic says:

    This is divine! Absolutely spectacular, I love it

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    1. Ace says:

      Awww thank you so much!!!! I am so happy to hear that!!! Appreciate you and your support, always!!! Hugs and love, my amazing friend 🤗🖤

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      1. kimmagic says:

        The pleasure is mine 😃😄

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  14. Rabbia says:

    Superb,,💓💓💓💓

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    1. Ace says:

      Thank you so much, Rabbia!!! That truly means a lot, grateful for you 🤗🖤🤍

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  15. Filarance says:

    Wowww! Hello rhyming king! This is such a wonderful piece. Very beautiful written. I loved it very very much. You are really fantastic! You are the best! And the self love is more important! Very amazingly written my friend! I have shared your poems to my friends. They said they are very speechless and who is that such a intelligent and fantastic person! And they was very happy and they said update all the poem that written by ace. And I’m updating all your poems to them.. Now I’m very speechless. You are a Brilliant person! Keep rocking my friend!😊🖤

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    1. Ace says:

      Awwwwww you are the sweetest!!!! Thank you so much, dear friend!!! I am speechless!!! How touching and amazing that you share my poems, that means more than I can ever say!!! I can’t thank you enough for all the love and support you shower me with, you’re a gem and one of a kind!!! Thank you for being YOU!!!! Big big hugs, my dear friend!!! Grateful for you 🤗🤗🖤🤍

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      1. Filarance says:

        Awwwww!! I’m flattered by your words my dear friend! It’s really means to the world for me.. Most welcome! It’s my pleasure! Big big hugs!.

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  16. ashok says:

    Soooo beautiful Ace. Love, love this 💖💖

    I have no doubt that all the versions of Ace would be filled with Grace and would be shining somewhere in the vast and infinite space 💖🤗

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    1. Ace says:

      Thank you so much, Ashok!!! Awwwww ☺️, what do I even say?!? That is so kind, my heart and face are smiling!!!! You always know how to leave me so touched and how to brighten my day! Thanks for being amazingly YOU…the Universe knows it’s lucky to have the thoughtful, always loving and divine Ashok!!! And so am I 🤗, appreciate you 🖤🤍

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      1. ashok says:

        Entirely my pleasure my dear Ace 💖🤗

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  17. Diana says:

    How very sweet and beautiful, Ace! Loved every stanza. Sometimes, whem we write, it helps to uncover who we truly are, isn’t it!! Just beautiful!! Stay blessed dear one. 😊🤗🌹🙏💐🎁😘

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    1. Ace says:

      Aww Diana, thank you so much!!! That means a lot coming from one of my favorite writers!! YES, it does…writing has that powerful magic. Your comments forever have a special place in my heart, your support inspires me! Thank you for being such a dear friend to me. Hugs and love 🤗🖤🤍

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  18. Alina says:

    Aaaaaah, I missed your writing so much, Ace! Each and every line was wonderful but the last stanza was definitely the best! Great starting as well.

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    1. Ace says:

      Awww Alina, I missed connecting so much!!! It’s amazing to have you back! Thank you so much!!! I’m so happy to hear that!!! Your kind words and support mean a lot, appreciate you!!! Much love, my friend 🤗🖤

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  19. a.s. says:

    This is AMAZING! Love that last stanza. The whole thing is just so beautifully written! Well done!! ❤❤

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    1. Ace says:

      Aww thank you so much!!! Your kind words and support always mean a lot…more than I can say!! Hugs and love, my amazing friend 🤗🖤🤍

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  20. Wow… Amazing. This is so beautiful….

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    1. Ace says:

      Thank you so much!!! That truly means a lot, grateful for your support! Hugs and love 🤗🖤

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      1. You are so sweet 😀❤

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  21. Rishika Jain says:

    “I wish I knew all of me
    The me who’s alive in that bee
    The me who’s roots spread like a tree
    And the infinite me eyes can’t see”
    ACEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!! Eeeeeeeep I love it so much, stunning, fabulous, marvellous, perfect and resonating

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    1. Ace says:

      Awwww Rishika, how kind of you to quote it…I’m deeply touched!!! Yay I’m so elated to hear that!!!!! I can’t express my true gratitude to you as words don’t even come close! You’re a gem and I feel so lucky to have you in my corner! It’s awesome to have you back, my lovely friend! Appreciate you 🤗🖤🤍

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  22. All of this is soooooooo good! And stanza 3 and 4 it the top of the top. You always bring such lovely perspective to your writing. And it has such universal appeal. Fantastic!

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    1. Ace says:

      Awwww Ben, you make my day!!! Thank you so much!!! It truly means a lot especially coming from one of my favorite writers!!!!! Your encouragement always inspires me, grateful for you! Hugs and love, my dear friend 🤗🖤

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      1. You’re welcome! It’s awesome how you stay true to yourself and your creative process. You already inspire many. Keep it up! 🙂

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  23. The indestructible timeless divinity present in each one of us, spanning our lifetime and lifeline, the all-knowing thread that runs from one to other with no ends on either side – you describe the curiosity of actually getting to know it all in this moment so absolutely beautifully!!

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    1. Ace says:

      Wow thank you so much!!! I am beyond words touched by your oh so kind comment!!! I love how you describe it as a “thread”, that’s the perfect word!! Ah I’m so glad to hear that, it was my hope to write about the uncertainties in a comforting way! You’re always so thoughtful and so in tune with all my pieces, I feel very lucky to know you! Grateful for you, hugs and love 🤗🖤

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      1. I feel very lucky to get to read your work too 🙂

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  24. Aarushi says:

    so many times I’ve wished that, you put it into words. the last para was just wonderful 🥰🥰

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    1. Ace says:

      Aww I’m glad to know you relate! Thank you so much, dear Aarushi!!! Your always kind support inspires me and leaves me so touched, you the best!!!!! Love and light, my dear friend 🤍💫🤗

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  25. Loved it, that last stanza in particular! Beautifully penned

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    1. Ace says:

      Thank you so much!!! Aww I’m so happy to hear that!!!! And I appreciate your kind support and lovely comment, means a lot!!! Hugs and love, new friend 🤗🖤

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      1. You deserve it. You’re very welcome. Hugs and love to you, new friend. Glad I came across your blog 😃

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  26. Sara says:

    Beautiful ending to a truly beautiful poem. 💗

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    1. Ace says:

      Aww thank you so much, Sara!!! You’re so kind…I’m deeply touched by your lovely comment. Appreciate you, dear friend 🤗🖤

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