versions of me

I wish I knew me when I was young
The me that didn’t exist in this time
But in a song the stars sung
Who’s the me that started this climb?

I wish I knew me when I was old
A story, a timeline already told
The me existing beyond form
In destiny’s soothing swarm

I wish I knew all of me
The me who’s alive in that bee
The me who’s roots spread like a tree
And the infinite me eyes can’t see

I wish I knew my divinity
My internal eternity
Take me to a place
A structureless space

I know me
A part who chose to be
In this life, as this soul
That’s enough to be whole

Ace

And here’s the image version 🖤

72 responses to “versions of me”

    • Aww thank you so much!!! You’re so kind, I’m truly happy to hear that!!! Appreciate you and your support, always!!! Hugs and love, amazing friend 🖤🤗

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  1. Stunning piece, Ace. I loved each and every line of this beautifully expressed poem. Absolutely wonderful! I love the pattern and flow here and the awesome ending!!! Superb!! The elegance, grace, intrinsic beauty, universal love and depth in all your pieces are just amazing and so inspiring! Keep shining my friend.❤️

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    • Thank you so much, Grace!!!! Your support and kindness is always truly appreciated!!! I am deeply touched and grateful for all the love you shower me with, so blessed to know you! Ah I remember saying something very similar to you the other day 😉, so glad you see the same!!! Hugs and love, my inspiring friend 🖤🤗🤍

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      • Always a pleasure. I truly am very happy to have connected with you as well. So funny that we have similar responses to each other’s work but I guess great minds think alike.😊.Much love to you my friend.💕🙏💕

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  2. Wow, dear Ace!!! This is the best, of all your creations until today. 👏👏👏
    I so loved it from the start until the end.
    You have my all love and hugs for this beautiful poem. Keep writing…. Keep inspiring! 🤗😍

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    • Aww Preeths, thank you so much!!! I am so glad to hear that!!! You are the best, most kind and super thoughtful friend – I am beyond grateful for you!!! Thank you for always being in my corner and inspiring me, you’re a gem!! Always touched by your support, much love 🖤🤗

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  3. You’re the best, ACE!!! I LOVED the last line! ♥️ Gr(ace)fully written! Such a beautiful peice. You’re a perfect writer, Ace! 🤗 Much love to you, my friend 💖

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    • GEET, you make my day!!! Thank you so much!!!! I am incredibly grateful for you, your sweet comments always leave me deeply touched!!! Awwww that means a lot, truly inspires me 🖤🤗. Love you, my amazing friend 💖🥰

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  4. Oh!! I love this poem, dear Ace. It is beautiful, and the imagery you created for me of the human connection to all things was powerful and lovely. Wonderful, wonderful. Well done!!! ❤🤗❤

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    • Aww thank you so much!!! I’m so happy to hear that as it was my hope with this piece!!! I’m always so grateful for your deeply kind support, you’re just amazing!!! Thank you for always being there, my friend!!! Much love 🖤🤗🤍

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  5. Well That was again another excellent piece, my sister!!! Flowing through different timelines and then back to soul… just loved it 😍
    “I know me
    A part who chose to be
    In this life, as this soul
    That’s enough to be whole” This was the ‘cherry on the top’😍Thank you!!!

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    • Aww thank you so much!!!! Your comments are such a blessing to me…you’ve brightened my day, brother!!!! Ah I’m so glad to hear that!!! You are so kind, appreciate you so much!!! Always deeply touched by your thoughtful/loving support, means a lot! Hope you’re well and life’s good!!! Hugs and love 🖤🤗💫

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  6. Wowww! Hello rhyming king! This is such a wonderful piece. Very beautiful written. I loved it very very much. You are really fantastic! You are the best! And the self love is more important! Very amazingly written my friend! I have shared your poems to my friends. They said they are very speechless and who is that such a intelligent and fantastic person! And they was very happy and they said update all the poem that written by ace. And I’m updating all your poems to them.. Now I’m very speechless. You are a Brilliant person! Keep rocking my friend!😊🖤

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    • Awwwwww you are the sweetest!!!! Thank you so much, dear friend!!! I am speechless!!! How touching and amazing that you share my poems, that means more than I can ever say!!! I can’t thank you enough for all the love and support you shower me with, you’re a gem and one of a kind!!! Thank you for being YOU!!!! Big big hugs, my dear friend!!! Grateful for you 🤗🤗🖤🤍

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  7. Soooo beautiful Ace. Love, love this 💖💖

    I have no doubt that all the versions of Ace would be filled with Grace and would be shining somewhere in the vast and infinite space 💖🤗

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    • Thank you so much, Ashok!!! Awwwww ☺️, what do I even say?!? That is so kind, my heart and face are smiling!!!! You always know how to leave me so touched and how to brighten my day! Thanks for being amazingly YOU…the Universe knows it’s lucky to have the thoughtful, always loving and divine Ashok!!! And so am I 🤗, appreciate you 🖤🤍

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  8. How very sweet and beautiful, Ace! Loved every stanza. Sometimes, whem we write, it helps to uncover who we truly are, isn’t it!! Just beautiful!! Stay blessed dear one. 😊🤗🌹🙏💐🎁😘

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    • Aww Diana, thank you so much!!! That means a lot coming from one of my favorite writers!! YES, it does…writing has that powerful magic. Your comments forever have a special place in my heart, your support inspires me! Thank you for being such a dear friend to me. Hugs and love 🤗🖤🤍

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    • Awww Alina, I missed connecting so much!!! It’s amazing to have you back! Thank you so much!!! I’m so happy to hear that!!! Your kind words and support mean a lot, appreciate you!!! Much love, my friend 🤗🖤

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  9. “I wish I knew all of me
    The me who’s alive in that bee
    The me who’s roots spread like a tree
    And the infinite me eyes can’t see”
    ACEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!! Eeeeeeeep I love it so much, stunning, fabulous, marvellous, perfect and resonating

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    • Awwww Rishika, how kind of you to quote it…I’m deeply touched!!! Yay I’m so elated to hear that!!!!! I can’t express my true gratitude to you as words don’t even come close! You’re a gem and I feel so lucky to have you in my corner! It’s awesome to have you back, my lovely friend! Appreciate you 🤗🖤🤍

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    • Awwww Ben, you make my day!!! Thank you so much!!! It truly means a lot especially coming from one of my favorite writers!!!!! Your encouragement always inspires me, grateful for you! Hugs and love, my dear friend 🤗🖤

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  10. The indestructible timeless divinity present in each one of us, spanning our lifetime and lifeline, the all-knowing thread that runs from one to other with no ends on either side – you describe the curiosity of actually getting to know it all in this moment so absolutely beautifully!!

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    • Wow thank you so much!!! I am beyond words touched by your oh so kind comment!!! I love how you describe it as a “thread”, that’s the perfect word!! Ah I’m so glad to hear that, it was my hope to write about the uncertainties in a comforting way! You’re always so thoughtful and so in tune with all my pieces, I feel very lucky to know you! Grateful for you, hugs and love 🤗🖤

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    • Aww I’m glad to know you relate! Thank you so much, dear Aarushi!!! Your always kind support inspires me and leaves me so touched, you the best!!!!! Love and light, my dear friend 🤍💫🤗

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