Itโ€™s the invisible things
that we remember
The act of doing
sends a charge
But the act of feeling,
and being
leaves a mark

A formless knowing
invisible to the human eye
but deeply visible
to the internal light
When something
feels like home
But home has no limitations
freed from visibilityโ€™s cage
So, home becomes
the formless knowing

Sometimes I wonder
if my eyes truly see
Is the world invisible
and my human lenses
make it visible?

Maybe Iโ€™m invisible
dancing with the shadows
While the world screams
through the visible,
grasping for my attention
begging for my acceptance

When I look back
on my life thus far
Itโ€™s the invisible things
I cherish the most
The day I decided to live
fearlessly
The moment I realized
dreams and reality are one
The second I chose
to truly love and be me
To the world, it may blend in
But to me, it stands out

So, when I look ahead
on my life thatโ€™s to come
Itโ€™s the invisible things
I look forward to the most
The day I feel
a deeper me
The moment I listen
to my heartโ€™s entire song
The second I fly
into frequencyโ€™s arms
To the visible, it might be small
But to the invisible, it is all

Ace


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60 responses to “invisible”

    • Thanks so much, my dear Shweta!!! So good to hear from you, your support always means the world to me! Hope youโ€™re well and much love ๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿค—

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  1. WOW! This is such a beautiful poem, my dearest Ace. Authentic, loving, reflecting, rejoicing, and, of course, fearless…there are too many favorite lines to capture them all here, however, the notion of reflecting back upon what was, and celebrating the invisible and the feeling, while also looking forward to what will become in this same space, is extraordinarily beautiful, and touches my heart. Shining bright, you are, as always. Much love to you. โค๐Ÿค—โค

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    • My dearest Jeff, it always brings a smile to see your name in my notifications! Thank you so very much for deeply connecting with this piece and for leaving such thoughtfully supportive words! You truly are the best! YOU touch my heart! And my gratitude to you is overflowing, thank you for being such amazing friend to me ๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿค—

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      • Youโ€™re always welcome, my dearest Ace. Itโ€™s always my pleasure to read you. Your words always resonate. Aww, thank you, my dear friend, that means the world to me. Feeling grateful. ๐Ÿค—โค๏ธ

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    • Thanks so much, my dear friend!!!! Awww youโ€™re so very kind ๐Ÿ˜Š! Iโ€™m truly grateful for your loving words and fantabulous support ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ–ค! Much love, always ๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿค—

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  2. “dreams and reality are one”… sigh… lovely Ace. “The moment I listen / to my heartโ€™s entire song”… oh so lovely! Your heart’s ENTIRE song, gosh I love that. A wonderfully deep and reflective write (as always)

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    • Thank you so much, my lovely friend! You make my heart dance to your sweet words, Iโ€™m deeply touched! So happy to hear you love that line, I think itโ€™s my fav too. Appreciate you, you truly are amazing ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ–ค

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  3. “But the act of feeling,
    and being
    leaves a mark” Oh so wisely put my poetic Ace! Your whole poem, touches so deeply on what I like to include in “the transcendental” in the sublime parts of our life, that very few can find the words with which to reflect upon, but you do..you always do..You do not float on the surface habeebity, but dive down deep and bring up the treasures you find buried there. Gorgeous and courageous!โค๏ธ๐Ÿค—๐ŸŒŸ๐Ÿฆ‹

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    • My dearest Karima, it means the world to receive your gift of a comment! โ€œThe transcendentalโ€ – I LOVE that! Never thought of it that way, but you touch on such a magical meaning. Awwww โ˜บ๏ธ, thatโ€™s so very kind! YOU are a treasure to me! Thank you for always being so encouraging and supportive, you inspire me in so many ways ๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿค—

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    • Aww Auntie Marlene, thank you so very much!!!! Your sweet words and support always mean the world to me, I am forever grateful! Love you so much ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ–ค

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  4. What an excellent piece this was my sister, brilliant!!! This piece was just flowing through the invisible ๐Ÿคฉ You are absolutely right sister no material can bring true satisfaction and happines. So, it’s always wise to invest in the invisible.โœจ๐Ÿ˜‡ and the freedom you get is just beyond everything that can be scaled.๐Ÿค—
    “Maybe Iโ€™m invisible
    dancing with the shadows
    While the world screams
    through the visible,
    grasping for my attention
    begging for my acceptance” These lines resonated with me the most. So, beautiful๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™ Thank you soooo much sister for this wonderful piece!!! I am just blessed to have found your blog ig… maybe it was the ‘invisible’s’ play๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿค—

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    • My dear brother, thank you so very much!!!! You are so thoughtful in how you tie โ€œinvisibleโ€ into this special comment, you are just awesome! So wisely said about investing in the invisible, I love love that! And yes, freedom plays a huge role in it! So touched to hear those lines resonate with you the most, big big smiles! Thank YOU soooooo much for being such a wonderful friend in so many ways, you mean a lot to me! Ah haha, the invisible definitely played a part!!!! Much love, always ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ–ค

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  5. God is invisible, but his presence is felt. Love is invisible, but its presence is always felt. But such gentle power with beauty is visible in this post. The last two lines are just awesome. It deeply resonates with me. Well done, Ace, once again ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ’๐Ÿ’–

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    • YES! My dear KK, I love your examples of invisibility here…thank you so much for sharing your wisdom! Your support always means the world to me, such a gift to be read by you! Much love, always ๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿค—

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  6. Your poems take us all on journeys of self- reflection, and finding oneself. That’s what I love most about your beautiful posts, dear Ace!!! This was a gorgeous read and I truly don’t know which line is my favorite!! Stay blessed dear one and keep spreading the light of truth and hope. โค๏ธ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ™๐ŸŒน

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    • Awww my dearest Diana, you are so truly amazing!!!! What touching words, you make my day! Your loving support and encouragement has such a special place in my heart and will live on forever. Thank you for always being in my corner and for being such a wonderful friend. Love you ๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿค—

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  7. Ace, Ace…my dearest Ace…you took me right away to this space…invisible to this organ eye…but it truly does exist, no one can deny…you must know, every single line…every single verse is simply shining…I feel like I’m that water…crying the invisible ocean…but the thing is that my eyes are diving…deep & seeing the light in your magical writing…it’s so crazy visible from your profound writings how amazing you truly are…just like the Universe…I love invisible…this poem of yoursโœจ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’ซ๐Ÿค๐ŸŒŸ

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    • Aww my dearest Navin, thank you so much for such a sweet message! You truly are the best! YOUR comment is shining in every way and Iโ€™m so forever grateful! Thank you for deeply seeing this piece and connecting, means more than I can say! Every time I receive one of your magical comments, I always feel so beyond lucky to have you as a reader, as a dear friend! Appreciate you, always ๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’ซ

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  8. Hellooooooo dear aceeeee!!
    Now I’m here!!
    “INVISIBLE” POST..!

    Ahhhh!! Wowwwwwwww!! This is such a marvellous write my sweetie..! And you know my dear, I want to be invisible..!๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ I loved each and every stanza my dear..! You’re truly a gem..! Reading your posts will always bring blessings to my eyes..!

    “Maybe Iโ€™m invisible
    dancing with the shadows
    While the world screams
    through the visible,
    grasping for my attention
    begging for my acceptance”

    This stanza is very beautiful my sweetie..! And if you ask me that which stanza is your favourite!? Then I should send the whole poem..! Because whole poem is Very Amazing and wonderful dear..! Keep on shinning my bestie..! Now I’m going to jump to another post of yours sweetie..! See you there..! Love you my dear Cinderella..!๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—

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